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limejuizeReview:
Hey you author person *pokes* Are you going to update this anytime soon? The suspense is killing me and I really enjoy the story, so could you pleeease *with a cherry on top* update soon.
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limejuize] • Date [17 Feb 08] • Not Rated
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APSReview:
Great story,
keep up the good work.
Review By [
APS] • Date [18 Oct 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from
thecrystalkeyReview:
Yay! for Hyena!Xander (and Soldier!Xander). I love this story. Awesome.
Review By [
thecrystalkey] • Date [17 Oct 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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mithrilandtjReview:
Uh oh.
Review By [
mithrilandtj] • Date [16 Oct 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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BobbokyReview:
will you tie the soldier thing into the White Knight thing and the One Who Sees thing?
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Bobboky] • Date [16 Oct 07] • Not Rated
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SparrowReview:
am very much loving this fic! Also, if it's counting on Xander's past experiences, what about when he was split into two or the swim meet stuff, he would still have stuff like that lying around in him. Plus, he has been hit by Willow's mojo ontop of the cliff, there's also when he was infected with syphillis and also, the first slayer spirit invaded his dreams, you know stuff like that has just gotta be floating around waiting to be used. :D
Comments from author:
AAAAHHH!!! INFORMATION OVERLOAD!!!
-Laughing- OK, so I could give Xander more abilities, based on other past experiences, but then he'd be unrealistically powerful. Also, let's try and NOT make him go insane. Can you imagine trying to keep up with all those possible abilities? As it is, Xander's two possessions are the things that stand out the most in my mind as possibilities for abilities. Mostly, I just really, really liked those episodes and watched them more than the others. I won't mention just how much Hyena!Xander's sexiness influenced my decision. Ahem.
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Sparrow] • Date [16 Oct 07] • Not Rated
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djhardimReview:
It could be worse for Xander. At least he won't have to deal with the Swim Team treatment.
Comments from author:
Ah, the Swim Team incident...pardon me while I drool over Nicholas Branden's lovely...assets.
Ahem.
While I would love to give Xander the 'Swim Team treatment', which would be really cool, I see Xander as having the kind of abilities that would help others see him as he truly is: a protector. Xander by nature is highly protective of those he loves, and is a fundamentally simple guy. His core values are basic: if someone threatens him or his own, that threat is done away with. I think that returning the abilities from the Soldier (who is a being designed to protect), and the Hyena (who is pack leader, enforcer, and protector) very conveniently and thoroughly supplement who Xander is. Also, while aquatic abilities would come in handy under certain circumstances, I doubt that such circumstances would happen very often; in contrast, the combat abilities that come from the other abilities would come in handy in pretty much any circumstance imaginable.
Review By [
djhardim] • Date [16 Oct 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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BluesnowmanReview:
Great stuff.
Review By [
Bluesnowman] • Date [10 Oct 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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LadyReview:
So glad that this one is going forwards still. Great ideas and nice to see some different faces in the tale. Looking forward to more. Please!!!!!
Review By [
Lady] • Date [9 Oct 07] • Not Rated
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mithrilandtjReview:
Cool!
update soon!
Review By [
mithrilandtj] • Date [9 Oct 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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BobbokyReview:
good
Review By [
Bobboky] • Date [9 Oct 07] • Not Rated
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WauziReview:
Interesting series so far! You've got there a nice bunch of people thrown together.
Keep up the good work.
Wauzi
Review By [
Wauzi] • Date [31 Jul 07] • Not Rated
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ValandarReview:
Wow... that HAS to beone of the most convoluted ways to teleport I have EVER heard of. Cool, though. :D
Comments from author:
Hah-hah! I have to agree with you! I've just always wondered about characters who can change into animals...what if they could turn into their animal bodies, only in a different place? Is that really such a big leap? It's probably senseless, but it is a fun idea. Anyway, I hope it's not overly ridiculous?
Review By [
Valandar] • Date [30 Jul 07] • Not Rated
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purrfusReview:
Just found - interesting combination of characters.
Review By [
purrfus] • Date [30 Jul 07] • Not Rated
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BobbokyReview:
good
Review By [
Bobboky] • Date [30 Jul 07] • Not Rated