I like it!

One question though: Is Aurora Munroe supposed to be Storm?
if so then her name should be 'Ororo'

-Laughs-

I've had this same question in a couple previous reviews.
My explanation is that, in this case, it's just my personal preference. I know that 'Ororo' is the original African spelling, and is canonical, but I've had several friends protest that particular spelling. Since then, I've gone with the English manner of spelling the name, which, because English is my first language, is more attractive to me personally. It is a personal preference, and I really don't blame anyone for being aggravated with my 'mis-spelling'. Sometimes I can get rabid over small canon errors, myself.

good

Sweet!

I disagree with you. I read this WITHOUT reading the so-called sequel, and I understood it perfectly. It would be nice if you would actually put these stories into the same series-block so that they can be more easily accessed in the correct order.

Danke, I'm off to read the other story now!

That does clear up a lot. And it let me update my list. So, now that I will not look like a complete pillock, I will review the other one.