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springReview:
This is beyond wonderful.
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spring] • Date [30 Dec 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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HeatherKatReview:
I love the story, but the last line gave me a terrible, wicked idea for a future continuance. When Harry misses the cookout, Molly sends a disguised portkey to Harry and he disappears in front of Xander and the girls. Then, of course, Xander and the slayers and Willow decide to go rescue Harry. I can just see the facedown over the misunderstanding. Anyway, I look forward to reading more stories.
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HeatherKat] • Date [24 Aug 08] • Not Rated
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junnightsReview:
I like this one:) make more please:P but only if you want to:) cause its great on its own...
me
Review By [
junnights] • Date [27 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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APSReview:
Great story,
keep up the good work.
Review By [
APS] • Date [11 Feb 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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ElleriaReview:
Is good.
Review By [
Elleria] • Date [10 Sep 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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shadowtricksterReview:
hey! this is a very cool story. :D i love the similarity between xander and sirius! and harry's 'exquisite culinary talents'... :)) i especially love this line:
"I like your cooking. I'm tempted to tie you down so you can't leave me with Andrew's or my own cooking."
:))
i hope that this will have a sequel... great job!
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shadowtrickster] • Date [8 Aug 07] • Not Rated
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InfinixReview:
The two of them together raising hell certainly has options and I hope you plan on actually doing a sequel and showing what they do.
Review By [
Infinix] • Date [14 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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DuskieReview:
MMMM. much like.
Hope you tell the story too.
Review By [
Duskie] • Date [13 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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linkReview:
I think, being out of England might be good for Harry. Away from the worshippers. Nice fic.
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link] • Date [13 Jul 07] • Not Rated
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jupitarsdaughterReview:
Coolies! Do we get to see the fall out you mentioned at the beginning?
Review By [
jupitarsdaughter] • Date [13 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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neverwillReview:
You've whetted my appetite - what's the prank? What inspired it? Since it reads like one of Xander's grandparents was a Black and a squib is Xander a wizard too? (He did set that book on fire accidentally back in high school.)
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neverwill] • Date [12 Jul 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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DragonhulkReview:
A very nice short story.
Personally I would love it if you did a follow up, but will understand if you don't. Sometimes stories are just better when most of it is left to the readers imagination.
Review By [
Dragonhulk] • Date [12 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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DreamweaverReview:
I kinda really liked your work in this chapter. Think you would ever give a thought to making is a full-bodied storywork? You know, sort of like a, um, post-J.K. Rowlings Harry Potter thing? Or, maybe, what might have happened to Harry Potter after the last book ended?
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Dreamweaver] • Date [12 Jul 07] • Not Rated
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LemonsReview:
It's rather brilliant-you really should continue this, it would make a great series.
Review By [
Lemons] • Date [12 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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BumpkinReview:
I really liked this - its a lovely introduction into a universe that you have set up. Now to play with some more adventures as well as fill in a bit more of the back story in some more stories as you go. Yes?
keep penning,
Marns
~pobody's Nerfect
Review By [
Bumpkin] • Date [12 Jul 07] • Not Rated
