Man, as many interesting kinky girl love stories as you write you need to pick some and finish them (and BTW, that is an endorsement for you to pick this one).

Your other story with FredLeeria / Luna and Harry caught my attention and I was inspired to write a challenge along the lines of your first few chapters of this story. Thankfully I checked to see if someone had answered the challenge before it was written! (I may still write the challenge, just to see what turns up.)

An interesting story, but I'm not so sure I appreciate the dip into the DnD monster manual to fill out the non-humans, an interesting twist though for sure. You might want to mention that you're also changing the timing of Harry Potter as canonically it takes place over the years 1990 to 1997, so you'd be pushing it back by roughly 7-8 years.

Again, great story, interesting plots abound, a few too many OCs (especially the ones mentioned seemingly off hand in the last few chapters) but incredibly intriguing.

Most of your pics on photobucket are down I would suggest Imageshack other then that I hope this story isn't dead.

It's dead, Jim.

Oh, by the way... what does Illyria's symbol look like? Or did you put up a picture, but get it deleted by photobucket. I've seen the dead links throughout the story; it's a pity I can't see it fully illustrated.

Love the Lunyria pic, by the way. So creepy, yet cute.

I just called a tentacly Old One cute... Bright Havens, but that's wierd.

Heh.

This story is bloody amazing, man. Illyria's so... well, not evil, but quirky. Definitely Luna-influenced, but not in an unbelievable way. Potter's believabley written, and Ron makes me WANT Illyria to whump him.

Are you sure you won't finish it? Pleeeaaasssseeee?

I will unleash the Puppy Dog Eyes of Doom, you know!

Just reread this story and would love to see it continued.........


.....please?

Not likely. I have other projects in progress at the moment.

I love the rewrite and how Harry wants to know Daphne first. Illyria is much more Illyria like now, before the rewrite I had a hard time imagining her as a sexual being.

Also I've done some fan art for this fic. You can find it at http://www.tthfanfic.org/story.php?no=15057&;

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Well if the next rewrite is as good as the last one I will be very happy to read it again. But I'll have to wait a bit be fore I read it, so I don't really remember what happened before, otherwise it gets boring.

It might actually get one last revamp. I'm still not happy with this came out; I made the mistake of writing it without a plan, then revising it and starting the rewrite before I finalized my plans for the new story.

Great chapter please update soon.

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Eep.

Great story. I may disagree with Harry's actions in this chapter. It does not seem correct that a male of his age would refuse a beautiful woman who offered herself to him, regardless of his good intentions. I don't find it plausible. Overall the fic is very exciting. please write more.

I did it. My current girlfriend was a virgin and has an extremely submissive personality. I turned her down numerous times, including several times where she dropped her clothes on the floor and offered herself (where I got the inspiration for this) because I was fairly certain she wasn't ready and just thought she had to do it to please me.

Yesh! I'm finally caought up. God, you write the best stories! And these are funny as hell. Please, do continue on with the story and update soon.

Not sure when this will update, since I have a different project for NaNoWriMo.

a bit confused by the last few chapters, but quite good.

Damn disappointed that there was no hermione in the trip Y_y

She's got her own role to play. As for confusing, that does tend to happen when I've got the outline for #1-50 done and have subplots coming and going all over the place...

Wow...this was *good*.

Very.

Hermione is my favorite HP character though, so i am hoping you do her well :p

She'll be a relatively minor character, but she'll get more love than most of the minors. :)

hum...i took some time to read that, mostly because i was kinda scared by your semi-dark harry. It's well written though (more than usual for your fic) and quite funny.

Ploughing on!

That's cuz unlike my crackfics, this is one of my babies...

Mistress-of-the-Oedipal-Complex!Tonks was great. XD

I like the interaction between Harry and Daphne. It makes sense, given his personal history. (One thing JKR did not write well was teenage romance.)

I like pretty much all of it, actually. I keep having to remind myself to picture Illyria as Luna, though. ::coughmoreartcough:: ;)

Monica is attending college right now, but will finish Daphne as well as doing two more pieces during "summer" (she's in South America) break.

upon rereading after the change rounds I am greatly pleased to inform you that my review is essentially one word. Wow! Yup, I can't think of anything more coherent then that but day-um Joe, that was good. I liked how it's no longer Tonks listening in and freaking out to the sexifcation of Bluena and Potter-Black also minimized Hermione stuff.

Peace out and I look forward to more.

I'm working on it. :)

After the change around I decided I really needed to re-read the entire story - life is so hard.

I don't remember the artwork being in the first chapter the last time around. Really really nice choice of pieces and great choice of artist.

The art was scattered through the fic. Moved it there so that people with modems can just get hit once on a big page instead of it loading all over the place. :)