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springReview:
I love this fic so far please please update this wonderful fic again soon.
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spring] • Date [16 Oct 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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purrfusReview:
Wonderful babble.
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purrfus] • Date [17 Jul 07] • Not Rated
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jupitarsdaughterReview:
Seems interesting!
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jupitarsdaughter] • Date [17 Jul 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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magikReview:
I want to see where you go with this! Great Idea!
Review By [
magik] • Date [17 Jul 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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azulkanReview:
Looking forward to the next chapter. Soon please.
Review By [
azulkan] • Date [17 Jul 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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mousemtReview:
Fun start. The characters are believable, and the writing's good.
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mousemt] • Date [16 Jul 07] • Not Rated
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WiseReview:
Not bad, but it reads like a first draft, or a story published without first being sent off to pre-readers. A revision with an eye for clarity and dialogue would do the story a world of good.
Review By [
Wise] • Date [16 Jul 07] • Rating [5 out of 10]
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JerriReview:
This was well written and entertaining.
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Jerri] • Date [16 Jul 07] • Not Rated
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RachelKReview:
It was sweet. And the conversation wasn't too long. A little more physical description of the space people are standing in, maybe.. that's about it. Looking forward to seeing what you do later on -- who will flirt more with Tonks (if she is there at all)- Xander or Willow?
Comments from author:
Thanks, yeah I only thought about surroundings afterwards. So I hope to do better next chapter.
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RachelK] • Date [16 Jul 07] • Not Rated
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amusewithaviewReview:
Interesting premise but you need a beta, or to look over your own work and fix up the punctuation errors. This is not meant as a 'flame,' just some constructive criticism. You have a lot of nice characterizations going - especially Willow and Andrew, you just need to invest a little more time in combing through for the little mistakes.
Danke
Review By [
amusewithaview] • Date [16 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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LemonsReview:
I'm the first one to review!!!!
go me!!!
I love the story so please continue!!!!!!
Review By [
Lemons] • Date [16 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
LemonsReview:
I'm the first one to review!!!!
go me!!!
I love the story so please continue!!!!!!
Comments from author:
Yay you and thanks for reviewing. I'll try not to be too long with the update.
Review By [
Lemons] • Date [16 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
