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Courtly Behaviour

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Review of chapter "Chapter 10: That First Step" from Noclaf
Review:
this story is 3years old so I'm guessing it's dead, but I would absolutely love to see a sequel or a short drabble that details the fate of poor Westley.
Review By [Noclaf] • Date [12 Jun 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10: That First Step" from Immortal
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Ahh, I re-read this fic for the first time in a good long while, and it is just a joy to read now as it was back in thee day. I don't know whether it will ever be updated, but I sincerely hope that it will!
Review By [Immortal] • Date [22 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10: That First Step" from junnights
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Hi:) love your story:D its amazing how you well you've written this:D I can't wait for next chapter... and I DO hope there will be more (PLEASE!) otherwise I'll cry "sniffle" (hehe)... well... Keep writing:D

Hildegunn
Review By [junnights] • Date [9 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10: That First Step" from HiltonK
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Great stuff.

You know, it's never to late to add more..... :0)
Review By [HiltonK] • Date [6 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10: That First Step" from mithrilandtj
Review:
Are you ever gonna update this story?

This is SO GOOD!!!
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [6 Jan 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Courtly Behaviour" from Forge
Review:
This remains one of my favorite crossovers of all time. It is respectful to both fandoms and all the characters... oh and it's Wesley. The poor man isn't used nearly often enough in fanfics. I'm no stranger to long breaks having once gone a year between chapters myself, but I do hope this is continued. Wes/ Eowyn sounds great and she hasn't even showed up yet.

Ciao
Review By [Forge] • Date [28 Dec 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10: That First Step" from GoldenRat
Review:
Great fic. I like how Wesley doesn't end up included in the Fellowship. I always found that to be pretty unlikely when done in other LotR crossovers. Wesley's friendship with Haldir is a surprise, but believably developed. Can't wait to read more.
Comments from author:
And I can't wait to find time to write more! Alas, RL ate all my ficcish energy. One day, perhaps, I'll have time to get back into writing fic. Thanks for the review, and I agree re: the Fellowship.
Review By [GoldenRat] • Date [17 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10: That First Step" from ElaineRhodes
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I'm just revisting this story. I hope you will continue this someday, and not leave us hanging. I do enjoy your Wesley!
Comments from author:
It's all plotted out to the end, it just has to be fleshed out properly. If I could only find the time, it would make me ecstatic. Seriously.
Review By [ElaineRhodes] • Date [11 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10: That First Step" from zafaran
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More, more, please. This is a very interesting and compelling story so far, and I would dearly love to find out what happens in the rest of the story. I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to write and post more chapters about Wesley's adventures in Middle Earth sometime soon. Keep up the good work.
Zafaran
zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm
Comments from author:
I wish I could find the time, seriously. One day, I promise I will.
Review By [zafaran] • Date [3 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "7: Mirror, mirror on the wall" from EchoElizabeth
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Beautiful! Although, you keep mentioning Dante, which is irritating as I'm reading your story in a procrastination attempt to avoid writing a paper on the Inferno. ^^ Still, Italian poets notwithstanding, your writing is gorgeous and your characterization intriguing. My only complaint is the ease with which Wes picked up the language; is there some reason behind that which you'll explain later? Commonalities or magic of some sort?

Wonderful story, and I look forward to reading the rest of it. ^^
-Echo
Review By [EchoElizabeth] • Date [8 Feb 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10: That First Step" from purrfus
Review:
Looking for Wesley stories and found this. The story is very well written, and your Wesley is wonderful. I was so sad when I reached the the last chapter and realized you hadn't updated since 2005. Please come back.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [7 Dec 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10: That First Step" from feuerfliege
Review:
Love this. Please don't let it end here!
Review By [feuerfliege] • Date [14 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10: That First Step" from ElfgirlJen
Review:
please update soon
Review By [ElfgirlJen] • Date [13 Mar 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "3: Up the Axe" from Angrycupcake
Review:
This sounds like a good idea and I really like your version of Wes, but the language thing bugs the hell out of me. I think it almost better if you had just broken down and allowed Wesley to be able to speak the common tongue. I can't suspend my belief enough to believe that Wesley can speak as well to the fellowship as well as you have him doing after a few hours/days. It's not possible no matter how smart and schooled he is. Learning a new language as I'm sure you know takes at least a few months and thats with intense study. Wesley's fluidity issue could have been easily solved if you made mention of the common tongue sounding similar/related to some other language he'd studied.

Besides that I think I like the plot and the direction you're taking the story. Oh and your idea of pairing matched mine. Good or bad I like a variety of ending for a pairing. Constant fairy tale endings bore after a while.
Review By [Angrycupcake] • Date [3 Dec 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10: That First Step" from BCA
Review:
I love it! Please update soon.
Review By [BCA] • Date [2 Jul 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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