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Review of chapter "CHapte 10: How Did He Get There?" from allisonreeve
Review:
i really love this story please update it soon.
Comments from author:
Working on it now
Review By [allisonreeve] • Date [7 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "CHapte 10: How Did He Get There?" from SilverMcKenzie
Review:
I have read thousands and thousands of fan fictions in the past 17 years, but I can say, without a second thought, that this is my number one favorite fanfic ever (sorry about the run-on sentence, I'm just that excited that it's back). I gave this fic up as abandoned after chapter 9. I am absolutely thrilled to see it again. I think that the entire concept of this story is creative and addicting, and I can't wait to see where you take it. Like others I would like a prequel whenever you get to it.

After reading each and every one of the other reviews I find myself agreeing with AzrielSunHawk. If anyone has a problem with your concepts, views, or perceptions on characterization, then by all means read another fic. Constructive criticism is one thing, but there is absolutely no need for flaming on this or any other fanfic site. Please don't let anyone stop you from adding to a great story. Good work and keep it up.
Comments from author:
I will be trying to update this one soon. Thank you for the compliment, sometimes it get s hard ot write when all I hear is how bad it is and how dare i do that...
Review By [SilverMcKenzie] • Date [29 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "CHapte 10: How Did He Get There?" from elfwitch
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This is a great story so far. I would like to see it finished. I hope you finish or update it very soon. I really am enjoying your take on how the old ways are done in your world of harry potter. I think it is a great concept and if other people don't like it, well that is their opinion, but I think it is great.
Comments from author:
thank you for the compliments. I need to hear those sometimes. I actaully am working on all of them
Review By [elfwitch] • Date [25 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "CHapte 10: How Did He Get There?" from Elenea
Review:
That's a very interesting view on the harry potter verse, I like it!
Comments from author:
glad you enjoyed it. Now i have to go chase that muse down again
Review By [Elenea] • Date [10 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "CHapte 10: How Did He Get There?" from MoonlitFaith
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this is story is amazing, it was one of the best i've read, though i love sirius and he is my favourite character along with spike i love watching him get toned down a notch. seems we've finally got someone who can control the great sirius black, please keep writing
Comments from author:
I am glad you enjoyed it. yeah, someone needed to slap him down a little.

I will hopefully have more done soon. I had to find the hand written pieces
Review By [MoonlitFaith] • Date [26 Jul 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "CHapte 10: How Did He Get There?" from mpop
Review:
I like how many of your HP-stories makes Dumbledore the bad guy, but I like this one better than Ice Father because this one makes Lucius Malfoy as a good guy much more believable.
You should write more of this, it's a good story.
Comments from author:
well, my thoughts were if he wnas't part of the ahte group in shcool...what changed?

I plan to do more.
Review By [mpop] • Date [9 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "CHapte 10: How Did He Get There?" from GundumM
Review:
it's an interesting idea. i think i would like to see a continuation of this fic
Comments from author:
that amkes two of us (JK)
working on it now that i foudnt he file again
Review By [GundumM] • Date [6 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "CHapte 10: How Did He Get There?" from stacy
Review:
I really love your take on things. I cant wait to read more of your work. oh I plan on reading the rest no worries on that score, but have to go to work so cant read more for the next 8 hours.
Comments from author:
I ahve plenty of it there, enjoy
Review By [stacy] • Date [31 May 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "CHapte 10: How Did He Get There?" from (2007%20Donor)Aomizuoko
Review:
Nice story you got going here. Some of the characters seem out of character, but I still like it. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
not as OC as having WIllow with a character, a MALE character, that's celibant. Glad you like it though
Review By [(2007%20Donor)Aomizuoko] • Date [25 May 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "CHapte 10: How Did He Get There?" from mendenbar
Review:
I think I will be a whiny complainer. Why aren't you updating this story (and all your others) as fast as I would like? And whatever happened to Angel(us)? He came with Spike, everyone else seems to be accounted for, but he has become like smoke and disappeared up the chimney. Pleaase, don't leave me hanging like this.
Comments from author:
Sorry, this thing got flamed so bad I thought no one cared. I will see about updating it

Actually, he didn't SPike anemd him one of his heirs in LA
Review By [mendenbar] • Date [16 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "CHapte 10: How Did He Get There?" from Shezzi
Review:
Hey this is a great story. even though i would never have thought of anything like this, i like what you've done with it. i really really hope there will be more soon! love xx Shezzi
Comments from author:
I hope so too, honestly. I have so much noise in my ehad right nwo i'm working out three ideas a day
Review By [Shezzi] • Date [6 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "CHapte 10: How Did He Get There?" from SeekerSidhe
Review:
I really like the idea behind this story. However, I found myself feeling lost quite often. This felt like it was part of a series, and I was missing important plot lines from the previous stories.

All in all I really enjoyed it and I hope you continue the story.
Comments from author:
it's actually started in the middle fo things, all of my writing classes said to do that
Review By [SeekerSidhe] • Date [23 Mar 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "CHapte 10: How Did He Get There?" from TouchoftheWind
Review:
Very good story
Comments from author:
thank you.
Review By [TouchoftheWind] • Date [19 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "CHapte 10: How Did He Get There?" from Silvros
Review:
Wow, this is a great twist. I am looking forward to the next part to this story.

I do hope that you are having fun with this story too. I was upset that Molly appears to be a bit of a mean lady, but all in all it is a very wonderful story.

Thank you for writing it. Well time to read your other stories :~D

Cheers.
Comments from author:
enjoy them and there are some other ones. remeber Spike was furious when he arrived so let him get everything sorted and he'll have it okay
Review By [Silvros] • Date [19 Mar 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "CHapte 10: How Did He Get There?" from ladyknight
Review:
Hey, any chance of this story being finished or updated anytime soon? Pretty Please.....
Comments from author:
working on it
Review By [ladyknight] • Date [15 Feb 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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