Good plot. A little disjointed in spots. Seems to be some contradictions in the story. I thought only pure bloods and half bloods could learn and then you state even muggle-born can learn but it is more difficult. Would definitely like to see more.

I got yelled at for syaing there was oesmthign muggle borns can't learn. And most of them can't becusae they can't be bothered. Someone got mad Hermione wouldn't be able to do soemthing and while she can because of Jekyll, she has an attidue about being muggle born to get over.

Also, there is more coming, working on a few ideas for it. Draco dealing with his older sister who is a Slayer.

More, more, please. This is an interesting story, and I'm eagerly looking forward to seeing what happens next with Faith, Lucius, and the others. If you get a chance, you might want to find a beta reader to do a good copy edit on your story because there's a lot of problems with misspellings and stuff, but the story plot and structure is quite interesting. I hope your schedule and muse will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm

yeah hope to do mre eventually

This was really good

thanks.

Ohmygod!!! This story is amazing. I just have one request...please finish it soon!

soon as my HP muse comes back from lunch

Well, that's an interesting and intelligent take on the HP and Faith world.

I do like the power that Remus is showing... Hope he can share some of it with Oz.

###I am mostly writing because I'm sad people are giving you grief for writing what you want to. You SHOULD NEVER BE SHAMED FOR USING YOUR IMAGINATION. Do not let anyone tell you different.###

To the people who want things to be the way they like it: Grow up! If you find a story you don't like, read another. It's ok to critique, but it's NEVER OK to pester or abuse another writer into giving up on IDEAS. Ideas are precious creatures. If we all thought and wrote the same story there would only be one book in the world... I like it better that I get to have Buffy, HP and LOTR and SG1... etc... Plus thousands of years of classics of all cultures and kinds.

You only get that by allowing and ENCOURAGING thinking and writing that is DIFFERENT.

Yes, I do like the 'good guy's' better. So what? You're just writing a story - and an interesting one that kept me at the computer 'til I read ALL of it in one sitting instead of going home as I should (smile).

What is really fun about this story is that I get to see that there could be more to a character I didn't think much about, or even the 'bad guy'. The nuance of Snape, and the nuance of ALL the Buffy bad guys is what made them fascinating. Harry's always been a bit too 'good'. No one's that good... And yeah I know they say Faith's the 'dark' slayer, but Buffy in season six and beyond? Dark. Just different dark...

The one thing I want to urge you as an author to do, is to create more nuance even in your 'bad' guys... There's got to be a reason for Dumbledore's betrayal.. I know he's in the wrong in this story... It would be even better if you showed us why. In the last of the HP canon, we get glimpses of Dumbledore's darkness... Hope you can make use of it.

Peace and thank you.

Leah

Thank You for the ompliments. I am working on more of a lot of my fics but my brain overlaods with things I jsut have to rite them

I love your story. I can't wait for you to update!

working on it

Er... I sorta can't see Faith warming up to some random guy who claims he's her father THAT fast. Especially the whole 'daddy' thing. I doubt she'd be that accepting that fast.

And besides, while I would be sad if my spouse was murdered and my child kidnapped, I doubt Lucius would be so deeply attached or kind to a child that has grown up as a muggle.

I'll read on though.
Ta.
-Tamora

Uhm...I did state that it was an AU

sweet that was cool I love the updated chapter *grins* keep up the wonderful work *bounces*

working on it

Good chapter, a little short but good. So Drake is going to stay with his dad and sis! YEAH!!!! So Remus finally got some balls and took care of one of his problems. lol So where is Harry going to stay and when can you get the next installment?? This is soo good!

Remus didn't need ot get balls. he eneded Fenrir to directly cross the line no wolf will tolerate. Then, he could act but not before.
Harry will stay at the school for now but it won't be all sunshine and roses beucsae like Buffy adn CO will learn, this is not about him.

Yay! An update!

had some time

Excellent as always.

I thank you kindly

Wow! This story is amazing and I can't wait to read more! (my not so subtle hint for more chapters lol) I really love where you're going with this, the dynamics between everyone are very well written and I love that Severus is in on it with them. I love me my Snape lol. Ok, screw subtlety....WRITE MORE SOON PLEASE!!!!! :)

soon as I can. working on several things in my head

Oh Wow!!! I so totally love this story!!! I can't wait for more!!!!

working on it

Woot right on for updating *grins* loved the putting Draco in his place and putting harry in his place *snickers* do it again do it again *bounces*

give me time

Wonderful!