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BobbokyReview:
good
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Bobboky] • Date [7 Jan 09] • Not Rated
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ElleriaReview:
Ooo..update soon please!
Review By [
Elleria] • Date [3 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "22" from
AlmadynisReview:
LOVE this story!!!!!! Please update soon!
Review By [
Almadynis] • Date [6 Dec 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "22" from
sunameeReview:
Nice to see Simon is back. I wonder what happens when they meet up.
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sunamee] • Date [6 Dec 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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ElleriaReview:
Oh...this is so good. Looking forward to the next bit.
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Elleria] • Date [6 Dec 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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HermesAngelReview:
I just want to say that I love your story I re read it every time you update and when ever I'm jonesing for a good story keep writing I look forward to reading more
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HermesAngel] • Date [5 Dec 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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lillybReview:
good story but Xan seems a little too free with talking about money with strangers and i know the saint isn't usually all free with the personal info. not to be all critical but i don't think anyone with money would be talking to strangers about.
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lillyb] • Date [5 Dec 08] • Not Rated
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RevDorothyLReview:
Very fun!
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RevDorothyL] • Date [5 Dec 08] • Not Rated
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BobbokyReview:
cool
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Bobboky] • Date [5 Dec 08] • Not Rated
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InquisitorReview:
thanks for the update...if Xander really wanted to find where Simon Templar is currently located, he could had easily found him just by following Emma and get her to give Xander's contact info to Simon...
another thing to consider is who's the actual immortal...is Simon an Immortal or Xander...considering that Immortals are orphans, Simon is probably the immortal...so if Xander's quickening got activated, does that mean that Simon's quickening as well or he's still a pre-immortal...something i noticed in the Olaff troll episode, Xander was still conscious and wasn't dead when Olaf hit him with a hammer on the head and body while Buffy was hit and she was knocked out...also i was hoping that the Roswell Czechoslovakians had somehow interacted with his quickening and gave him some out of this world powers and that it was activated when he died...anyway i'm looking forward to the next chapter...hope it will be posted soon...
Comments from author:
Considering everything Simon's been through and lived... what do you think? *big evil grin*
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Inquisitor] • Date [5 Dec 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "22" from
grdReview:
Was really starting to wonder when the real Simon would notice things. Thank you for another fun chapter. Looking forward to Duncan and Xander meeting.
Review By [
grd] • Date [5 Dec 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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ValandarReview:
Nice work! But one thing jumped out at me and got a stranglehold on my more... retentive side. :P
It's not "incompasitated", it's "incapacitated" :D
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Valandar] • Date [5 Dec 08] • Not Rated
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BluesnowmanReview:
Great stuff.
Review By [
Bluesnowman] • Date [5 Dec 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "21" from
spuriousReview:
LOL. So he's not only an immortal, he's Dread Pirate Roberts.
Very good. I really liked the miami segment.
Review By [
spurious] • Date [25 Oct 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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deitarionSSokolowReview:
I love it. It's rare to find a story that blends so many series so smoothly... especially when you consider that it's difficult to write a story this enjoyable no matter how many or few stories you get.
I didn't get who Becky was (either I'm forgetful, or I've never seen her source... probably the latter) but I loved all the other series and movies you mixed in and I'm quite fond of the TV movie of The Saint (in the original novels, Emma died just another single-story love interest), so I'm glad you used it as a base.
I'm not entirely sure I like the change in tone that your addition of Highlander gives the story, but I'll give you the benefit of the doubt.
Comments from author:
Thanks. Becky is mine.. I made her up for her part of the story.
Review By [
deitarionSSokolow] • Date [24 Oct 08] • Not Rated