interesting story.

I love the ending line...
Hope to see more some day. Thanks for writing =)

Are you going to update this story soon? I really hope you do because it is awesome!!

Nice to see an update - no ideas on where you would go next though, sorry. :)

keep penning,
Marns
~pN

Wow...an update. Has been a while. Looking forward to the next bit.

I really love your story Consequences of Toth chapter 7 is a brilliant addition to this story. I really like the way the relationship between Asher, Narcissus and Xander is developing. As for suggestions what about Xander's blood gradually healing Asher's holy water wounds through his blood and sex as he comes from a dimension where vampires can heal holy water wounds. Another suggestion is that he is the reincarnation of Juilanna but nobody finds out until after Asher has fallen in love with Xander. Another suggestion I think he should have another power like a Seer him being the One Who Sees or maybe some other power in relation to the name the White Knight. Or maybe a healing power. Xander helps Jean-Claude fix the relationship with Anita and Richard or Jean-claude gets involved with Xander, Asher and Narcissus and makes him happy I feel sorry for him being stuck with two such difficult people. The are really too few Asher/Xander pairings thank you for writing this with addition of Narcissus it makes for very interesting relationship.

Great story so far. There's not enough Asher fic in the world so I'm glad for that and I'm glad you didn't make Xander hyper submissive by using the blood bind. Does Richard have a problem - other than being Richard?

dunno if I already reviewed, but I LOVE this story!! For the plot... although it's a 'little' over used, how about anita be VERRRY jealous, and when the Master's line comes to visit have Dru get all predictory and stuff......... i've been infected by watching too much buffy and got all the language mangling from them....

Great new chapters, always glad to see an update for an awesome fic. Can't wait to see more!

I'm happy to see an addition to this story! Very yummy.

Yay! I am so excited that you have FINALLY updated this story! I love your work and especially the ones with Xander in the Anita-verse!!!

This chapter was great! I'm glad you updated. I cant wait for the next part to come out! Keep 'em coming! You rock!

As for helpful suggestions, well will Xander change eventually and are there things we don't about Xander, will he want to learn more on how to fight and defense himself specially with the difference in that dimension, after time passes will Xander have change a bit in attitude and physically wise and how are the scoobies going to be (worried, searching for him, forgotten him?), hopefully after getting to know each other Asher and Xander mate and maybe Narci could be included, what job would Xander take (stripping again or construction or something else entirely).

I hope any of my suggestions or any suggestions from any other reader helps you somehow and gets your muse fed and going again.

Also I really hope you update soon again!!

Yay! Glad to see you updating.

Love it honey.

As to plot devices. . . . .

What about Edward dropping by and Xander talking guns *g* or showing that he isn't always a joker. Or Xander helping with a hunt that he's stuck on?

Also, is Xan going to eventually change? Could be interesting.

I would love to see more Asher Xan Narci stuff :)

Also, are there any fems to vie for his attention, in an evil way LOL

chaos

begs for any sort of updatage, even if it is to say that there will be no more of this fic -gives puss in boots eyes-


I loves it.