Good job on this, hope to read more soon.
Will there be any pairing in this story?

Thanks! I've actually got most of the next chapter for this written, but I need to transfer it over to my laptop and edit out the bugs. When I get more stuck on IND I'll probably do it, but since I've been on a bit of a roll with it, I'm going to try to keep my muse on task.

As for pairings, W/X G/Je B/? though I'm considering B/R.

Excellent story so far. Looking forward to more.

I've got most of the next chapter written, I've just got to transfer it to my laptop and round it out. It'll Probably get posted sometime in the next month, depending on how much trouble I have writing chapter three for IND.

Hmm, a Xander/Willow pairing? Inuyasha's ears aren't all that different than a diclonus' horns.

That's actually the reason she won't tear him to pieces the first time he insults her. :)

*shakes head* chapter two didn't tell me anything about what Willow dressed as either. Now a disclaimer saying what the series is, generally helps...

If you'll go back and read the opening Author's Note, you'll see that I identified what she is (Diclonius), what Anime it's from (Elfen Lied), and where to find information on these things (Wikipedia.com). The Anime is also mentioned in the disclaimer. As for not explaining more about Lucy, this is more a fix for the ending of Elfen Lied, because they never really say what happens to her in the series. Sorry for the confusion, but I'm not really familiar enough with the series to give a good background for Lucy/Nyu (Again, see author's note)

In any case thanks for your review.

never watched elfen lied so I looked it up,damn that is one dangerous unstable girl.

good story looking forward to your next chapter.

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I love it a lot and you must update soon

well after reading your fic I went out and got the first 3 dvd's of Trinity Blood and after watching them I have to say it should be interesting to see Asran and Inuyasha interacting.

good story looking forward to your next chapter.

That's the sort of thing I love to hear. Personally, I'm enjoying writing that part too.

Great start.

Maybe it's just me but I didn't see any problem with Xander's joke. Really hope this doesn't turn into a Xander-bashing story.

he just said the wrong thing at the wrong time. Sorta like Inuyasha . . .

nice start looking forward to your next chapter.

I like ths start of your story. I look forward to seeing where you take this mutated Helloween. Lol!

it's good can't wait till the next chapter could be interesting what will happen to them and all.

It's good to see more Halloween fics when everyone dress up differently.
Would have preferred Xellos over Inu Yasha, however.

Thank you, thank you, thank you. I was worried that no one would respond. Sorry about the disappointment,it seems that I have lots of good ideas but serious trouble putting them into practice. The only bit I could get to work was the end of the first chapter, the rest was either total drek or missing altogether. Your take on it is far superior.