Gotta say, this was good stuff. I liked how they were trying to keep their worlds separated from each other and in the end they came crashing together. Looking forward to seeing where you take this in the future.

Thank You! :)
I hope you like the next story in the series as well!!!!

cool I loved this it was so beliveable well done

Thank you soo much *Big grin* :D
It's good to know that I'm not stretching it too much to where people get turned off to it. Sometimes crossovers seems forced and it's hard to read them. So It's nice when people say mine's believable :)

I hope you like it's sequel just as much!!

Ooohhhh. The explanations are always fun.

UPDATE ASAP!

The story continues in "Tale Of Two Spirits". I hope you like it as well. :)

totally loved it!
looking forward to reading the sequel!
:)

I'm glad you like it!! And I hope you like the next one as well :)

Excellent so far, and Xander did pretty wel for his first solo demon hunt!

I'm glad you liked it!
Origionally I pictured Xander killing both demons, and Dean coming in time to witness it, but then I figured it would be more realistic this way. :)

I love Xander's really family stories, and I must say that this is one of my favorites, excellent job. :D
Enjoyed reading it very much...

Thank you soo much!! Especially since there are soo many in all those categories!!!!! :)
I like the Xander family stories too! :) My favorite is Distant Relations, which is why I ended up making this series. :)

*Giggle* I was feeling nostalgic and decided to re-read your Xander Winchester series, I had just reached the part where Xander was trying to convince his brothers that he has a sleep problem, and that admitting it is the first step to recovery, when I realized that I HAD to tell you how much I love the Brother’s Winchester! I know I’ve probably said all this before, but I find I just don’t care, so here goes: Xander’s attempt to make his brothers believe that he had sleep bruising combined with Sam gaping like a fish and Dean trying very hard not to rip the youngest Winchester’s head off was perfect. Then the look on Xander’s face when he realized that his “cupcakes” comment had been taken very differently by the waitress and his brothers was priceless! (I know I can’t see his face, but you paint such a vivid picture that I can easily imagine poor Xander’s embarrassment). Then Sam’s shock at what Xander had said, and Xander’s clueless question, followed by Sam attempting to both scold Xander for being so outrageous and defend his manliness “Of course I like her… cupcakes… but…” (not verbatim but the best I can do while laughing like a crazy person). Oh! Dean! He was so proud of Xander! Of course he would have been doubly proud had he known that Xander had killed a demon, saved the damsel, got her number, flirted with the waitress, and then made a charming/funny/unbelievable comment about her… girls. (First of course he would have kicked Xander’s ass for taking on a demon alone, but after he was done, SOOOOO proud!)

This is also a good time to mention that I LOVE overprotective-big brother-Dean. The intensity in his voice and in his gaze when he was worried about Xander, and again when he saw the bruises Tony had left on his baby brother *happywarmtingles* so wonderful. I love the way you use Dean’s voice, pitching it a certain way to let Sam and Xander know just how dead they are when he gets through with them. I am also constantly amazed by what you can convey with a look or a touch, from Dean. He has always had trouble vocalizing his feelings and you manage to bring out so much from the smallest gesture. (Again I know that I can’t really see our boys, but I’m a very visual person, I see what I read, and you make that incredibly easy… of course one has to be able to see the words they’re reading, unless you can read brail… maybe I should say I See what I read to imply that I’m seeing it in my mind rather than merely as words on a page *ponder*)

I've just realized how ridiculously long this review is... OK, I should go to sleep now (it’s almost 5am and I have stuff to do in a couple hours). However do not fear, I’ll be back to worshiping the ground you walk on in a little while. For now goodnight, I know that when I fall asleep it’ll be with a smile on my face :-)

Thank you soooooooo much for your review!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I always like to read your reviews, and this one was the BEST!!!!!!!!! *HUGE Grin* :]

'Demons, Lies, and Cupcakes' was my favorite chapter to write as well (that and Xander's birthday) :). So I'm really glad that you liked it soo much. It's soo cool when the parts that crack people up are the parts that cracked me up while I wrote them. :D

And it's a really good compliment that you can 'see' what I wrote, because that's how I read too. If I can't 'see' it, I just can't get into a story. I try to picture things in my head and try to describe what I 'see'. I'm relieved that it comes across.


I attempted to make a picture to capture Dean's protective side on my Xander Winchester fanart, but I haven't gotten any reviews yet to know if I did capture it. :( *Hint, hint :)*

Anyway, thanks again for the review!!!!!!!! And anytime you feel like gushing, feel free!!!! Like I said before, when readers say what they liked best, it helps the writer know what they're looking for. And it lets the writer feel appreciated, and lights a fire under their asses to get them to want to finish that darn chapter that's stuck in their heads so they can post it for the very nice and generous reviewers like yourself! :)
OK, that sounded a little too third person there. I'm sure you know what I meant though. Man, I HATE WRITER'S BLOCK!!!!!!!!!!!
I can picture what I want to happen in 'Tales Of Two Spirits', but only the action part. It's the getting there part that's giving me crap!
I wish I could just skip the crap, and get to where Xander encounters the damn thing!

Love this.

Sammy's jaw is gonna drop when he sees them coming out of the sewer!

Great story! Can't wait to read the next.

I'm glad you liked it! :) I hope you like the next one as well. :)

I do really like the real-family-fics, and yours has a reasonable reason for John W. not to be involved in Xander's life; if he were sending child support and thought Xander was safer, he might stay away. There were also lots of little humory bits that were enjoyable, and having them find out about the monster thing only by accident was a good idea. From the ending, I'm guessing you're planning a sequel? I look forward to reading it.

There's one grammar nit, though. Your=Your bunny slippers are purple. You're= You are wearing purple bunny slippers?

I like the real family fics too (I know, duh since I wrote one). I'm glad you and others agree on that. Because that's the only way I could see John staying away all those years. And I'm always glad to hear when people get my sense of humor. After all what's funny to one person could be far from it to others. :) My favorite movies have comedy mixed in with the horror, action, romance, or drama. So it's nice when people mention things made them laugh or that they found something humorous.
Yes, there will be a sequel. Several in fact. I've already written the prologue for the next two, and a few ideas for the next possible three or four. I was planning on getting the 2nd one up tonight, but as I got home later than I thought so I'd be lucky to get the prologue Even half way typed.
I REALLY HATE typing!!!! I'm not very fast, and I try to get it done as fast as I can. Especially since whenever I'm typing is when people want me to do something. Which is why sometimes Something like that your - you're thing might happen. B/c, I really DO know the difference, I promise!! :)
Did I do it all the time, or was it only here and there?

Another story before? Ooh, I'm excited. What's it about? What's it about? Come on tell me, tell me. I wanna know. Haha. I sound like a whiney fat kid in a candy store don't I?

And yay for you for getting such awesome reviews! You go girl!

You'll have to read to find out!! *evil laughter*
But you know me, if you keep bugging me, I'll probably cave!!! :) I already gave you too much info. on 'TMFH'. :( I HAD meant to keep Willow a secret in that story, but those darn pics had demanded to be made. And I had to post them and ruin it!!

So I want to keep some things to myself!!!!!


Yeah, people are soo great!! *beaming brightly* I'm hoping they'll follow me to the next few stories!!!!! :)

A round of applause with hugs and candy canes, (because strippers make an occasion special). That was wonderful and I can't wait to read more about the brothers three, hint hint : )

Thank you soo much for the applause * Giving a curtsy with a smile*

I'm hoping to get the prologue up soon for the next story in the series. :) I just have to finish writing it.

I know, I know! What the hell am I doing wasting time on the computer for, when I should be getting a move on!!!! :)

Woohoo! Yay, the next chapter and it's dedicated to me, How awesome is that? It was great and I'm sad it's over. *pouty face* But it was worth the ride. I loved it.

So is 'Text message from hell' going to be the continuation from this story cause I noticed that this story is the first of a series.

Awesome job once again, now I have to get my ass on track and do mine. Oh hey are you gonna be posting 'TMFH' anytime soon? Hint hint. Haha, just kidding.

'Text Message From Hell' is the third in the series.
It was going to be the second, but when I was writing the 1st chapter, the 'job' the boys were coming from before going to visit Willow made me go "That would make a good story on it's own!" Then the way I started THAT story, it made another story come to mind! Then I was like "I'll just combine the two stories. Since I don't know how long they'll be. And I'll call it 'Tale Of Two Spirits'. :)
I'm hoping to get the prologue done soon. Cross your fingers for me (except when your typing of course!)

You totally capture what is it about Xander that makes us love him. He's just an ordinary guy who do the right thing even when he's scared stiff. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

This story is finished I'm afraid. *wincing apologetically*

But I'm hoping to get the start of the next story in the series up soon. *only stops crossing fingers while typing, since it is so totally hard to type with crossed fingers!* :)