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Xander's Imaginary Friends

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Review of chapter "Do You Believe in Magic?" from DemonChildeKyra
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I love this story so far! The interaction between Xander and all of the different gods is so interesting! I can't wait to see how you integrate Bliss into highschool! More soon, please?

~ Kyra
Review By [DemonChildeKyra] • Date [15 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Aunt Janey" from afrancis
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I love this story. If you ever get the urge to write more of it, myself as well as many more people will be ecstatic.
Review By [afrancis] • Date [14 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Do You Believe in Magic?" from Infinix
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What kind of bribery via digital confection would it take to get you to continue this?
Review By [Infinix] • Date [14 Jun 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Do You Believe in Magic?" from Godogma
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I quite enjoyed this story and hope you continue it. Its one of the best done fics I've found on the site and I heartily recommend it as reading.
Review By [Godogma] • Date [12 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Do You Believe in Magic?" from kayron
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It's the same as the series... but not. The Greek gods and a supportive family leads to a new and improved Xander. I like the idea of a teen god going to highschool. This is a fun fic. I look forward to more.
Review By [kayron] • Date [10 Apr 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Do You Believe in Magic?" from MistieMossflower
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This is an excellent story and I've really enjoyed reading it. I hope that you will update it really really soon. ^_^
Review By [MistieMossflower] • Date [7 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Do You Believe in Magic?" from (2007%20Donor)KatrinaC
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*preens* I hope you can get more out soon!

*ponders* will Angel arrive soon... I can only imagine how Xander will cause him to react.... *cackles at the fear that will roll off the Vamp*

Maybe Xander will go with Ares and Eris to save Buffy at the Master's cave.....

*Ponders* will Xander have a love inerest? If so... could it be one of the Gods? or will it be more like the series.... *sighs* I can only hope that the Gods help him out with the Preying Mantis, Incan Mummy and the Possesion of the Hyena....

*giggles* I bet Discord will love the chaso... but will be pissed that it hurt Xander......

I kinda feel bad for Ethan Ryane when he comes in to play..... *cackles* solider possession and using the Gods to invoke it.... ohhhh they'll be pissed..... *cackles*

*smiles* I hope yo can get more out soon.... I really like this fic!
Review By [(2007%20Donor)KatrinaC] • Date [9 Feb 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Do You Believe in Magic?" from Infinix
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Nice chapter. I do have to say that Xander's speech patterns seem a bit more childish then in canon, he was always immature but words like "meanie" were always more Willow's thing than Xander's.
Review By [Infinix] • Date [17 Dec 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Do You Believe in Magic?" from Intermundia
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Yay for continuing this. I like it a lot. It was great
Review By [Intermundia] • Date [17 Dec 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Do You Believe in Magic?" from Jess
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Classic! *HUGS* I am glad you think my idea has merit.
Review By [Jess] • Date [17 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Do You Believe in Magic?" from ReflectionsOfReality
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Your alive!

This chapter is sort of good and I am glad about how close to the cannon series of Buffy you intend to follow.

I really did like Hecate's introduction and I almost wanted Xander to get some basic training with magic (though I would love for there to be scene where Hecate tries to figure out what about Xander causes magic to go wonky) or at the very least a basic understanding of how magic works even if he does not use it.

I have a few new ideas about the dog tags. The first is that it has some intelligence built in to them so as that it gives him the weapon it need but might not necessarily want. For example he has no training with a cross bow so instead it becomes a supersoaker filled with an endless supply of holy water, (and still what effect would there be on Holy water blessed by a god instead of a priest? Or even would holy water that a priest blesses then uses himself be more effective than that which is used by someone else? And since Xander is considered a priest of sorts would he be able to bless his own water? Maybe not in Ares name but Apollo or Helios (and can a god give another permission to bless things in their name?)) the second idea would be that the dog tags could only turn into weapons that Xander has been exposed to (with maybe some improvement, like endless ammo or automatically reloading crossbows maybe some divine twist like they were produced by artisans instead of mass produced over the counter standard stock). The third thought was that when Xander starts training under Aries that Aries might lock it so as it can only become weapons he is training with (unless directly appealed to him) that way he would learn through the submersion methods.

Then there is the slight comedic alternates when Xander is trying to learn proper visualization, i.e. he asks for a sword he gets something that more resembles an envelope opener, he then asks for a bigger sword and he gets a 20 meter long monstrosity that might have been used by Voltron or Power Rangers Megazord, he asks for a gun he gets a paint gun, he then asks for one with proper ammo and it become a paint ball gun, he asks for lead ammo and the paint becomes a thick white one he ask for one with solid projectiles and it becomes a nail gun (at which point he gives up and just starts shooting nails at the highest setting at the demon of the week).

The next thought was about armor, could the tags be used to form armor? I mean a Kevlar vest might be a good idea in certain instances but Iron Man armor might be hard to explain away (though there should not be a demon on the face of the earth that could stand up to it) let alone Spartan armor (though if you do want to play around with these but don't want to give him the strength thus warping the story both armors are designed for specific individuals with cybernetic implants without which he might as well be a piece of artwork for all the good that they would do for him so in essence he would call up the armor only to either keep whatever pose he is in or fall flat on his face) not to mention a Gundumn or even a fighter jet (there is little chance that he could plot either without extensive training so it probably would again be a better piece of sculpture than a weapon)... Though on this thought would he try to make a vehicle? I mean I can see him needing in a fit of panic to make a fast getaway and they can be used as a weapon, a nice Kawasaki Bike a 65 Mustang, heck even the Bat mobile would really be sweet...

The plot bunnies make themselves if you want more you know where to find me,
~Reflections
HarrisDaniel@hotmail.com
Review By [ReflectionsOfReality] • Date [16 Dec 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Do You Believe in Magic?" from speediebuffy
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I LOVE it. I can't wait for more
Review By [speediebuffy] • Date [16 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Do You Believe in Magic?" from Bobboky
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oh yea, and good to see another chapter in this story
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [16 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Do You Believe in Magic?" from Bobboky
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nice
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [16 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Tactical Meetings" from ZeeValentine
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the plot is not only interesting but also very unique at least to. you did a goood job of changing and adding things without chaging much, it make it very easy to follow with the timeline. the story is also not boring or confusing so it is very enttracing (is that even a word?) and quite flowy. keep up the good work. i will be waiting for more!
Comments from author:
I think you mean entrancing, and it is a word (I think...)

I'm so glad you enjoy it and find it easy to read, I hope I manage to keep it all that way!

thanks for the review! :)
Review By [ZeeValentine] • Date [16 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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