Great story. I like the way you're integrating Xander into things. My only issue is that it seems like you're rushing through things. Well, more that you're just hitting the events and not really including anything that may happen in between.

Regardless, I look forward to reading more.

oooooooooooh. :)) COOL. please update. :)

Dean remembers, finally. Xander shouldn't have made Dean forget. And the healing part is really cool. Love the way you keep fitting Xander into the show, very discreet and believable. Great job, hope you update soon...

Thanks so much for the positive praise. Makes me giddy.

Hey!! How ya doin?
Awesome chapter!!!!!!!!!!!
As always, it gets more amazing each chapter!!!!!!! :)
I would have read it sooner, when you first updated it, but my computer didn't let me online for DAYS!!!!!!!!!! :(

OMG!! Hey! How are you?
Me? God RL has been a real bitch. I havent been on here in forever.
Im like the worst reviewer ever. I havent even had the chance to read the new chapters to your story yet.
Thanks for the oh so fab review.
TTYL.

I like this story you are going to keep John Winchester from dying hopefully right

Excellent story...more please!

Thank you so much! I just posted the next chapter.

Long time no type! :) I was just going to type to ask how you were doing, and Yay! I saw you updated!

What can I say? As always it gets better and better! :)
And shame on Xander for doing the Willow forgetting spell! I hope HE doesn't go dark Xander like Willow too!
You did a really good job on Cordy too! :)

Hey, hey. I know right, its been a while. I saw you updated too, I haven't gotten the chance to read it yet, but I will today.

Thank you so much. I know right, shame on him, shame on all of them. But he won't go dark, but it might get a little dangerous later on. You know, I find myself so afraid to even write Cordy because I feel like I wouldn't do her justice, but its just so much fun and when I get stuck I just think 'What would I say?' cause were both bitches. Hehe.

I was just about to write to you too right after I posted the new chap to let you know that I did another version of the art that I did for "tmfh" I made it into a gif. Thanks so much for the lovely praise. TTY soon.

A new chapter, and so soon after I read the last. Excellent!
Did Dean use the same spell that Buffy used to see Dawn? Good decision on making him do it, it shows to what lengths he is willing to go for his family...
Am I getting this right, you have something new planed for all the Winchester boys? Very cool... :D
I admit it might be a bit much power to give to Xander, but if anyone can handle it, he can. As for the characters, I think you stayed true to them and they are just as they should be.
I love Cordelia's appearance from time-to-time, she rules :D
Hope to see more of the story soon...

yes, its the spell that buffy used to see dawn. not exactly the same, but close enough. and yes , new chapter. i got your review and i was just inspired to get out of my funky writers block, thank you.

and what do you mean by something new planned for the boys? i do have something planned for them that i dont think anyones gonna figure out until i post it. well hopefully. =)

anyways thanks so much for the awesome review, it totally makes me feel good and makes me wanna write more. hopefully i can get the next chapter up some time this weekend.

This cliffhanger was totally evil. But besides this, I really enjoyed this chapter and I hope that you decide to update again soon.

You know what's funny is that I wasn't completely through with the chapter. There was like 5 more pages to type out but since it wasn't done I decided to just end it there. And I've been being lazy and reviews are always a great motivator, so I was like 'what the hell' and just posted it.

Thanks so much for the review.

oh dear is xander pulling a williow...love it and cant wait to read more

Yes, I know. =) Thank you so much for the review.

Very very interesting!

I'm glad you thing so. Thanks so much!

OOOOH! Was the flower supposed to make Sam forget too? And did Xander forget the fight?

Yes the flower was supposed to make sam forget too. and no xander didnt forget. thanks for the review. more will be revealed in the next chapter.

Wow! What a story, I can't get enough of it. Very addictive story-line and you've managed to fit Xander rather well with the Winchesters.
Poor Xander, poor Dean, and poor Sam, they can't even imagine whats ahead of them.... Hope you update soon...

Wow, thank you so much. I've been wondering if this story just fell off with people, cause I haven't had much reviews for the last chapter. I think only two. So i've been trying to think whats turning people off. Is it too much power? Or that I'm not writing the characters believably (is that a word?) But I have it all planned out and I have the next chapter almost entirely written. I'm just being a lazy butt.

But once again thank you for such an awesome review.

I haven't thought of 'TOTS' since I signed up for the Fic-A-Thon.

Hey! 'Tale Of Two Spirits' ' apprevieation spells tots! I wonder if it's cause the boys and I are a bit childish sometimes, or if it's cause we can be couch potatoes (cause with Xander and Dean's pop culture knowledge, you know they were between demon fighting)!

I'm stuck on how the F-A-T (another wierd abreviation!) will go, so I'm doing the pics and work from there.

tots, thats funny. ooh, artwork. when are you gonna post it?

i just got through watchong an episode of buffy where she finds out that dawns not really her sister, that she's the key. i think i might include something like that in the next chapter. i kind of dread writing the rest. it just seems so long and daunting.

Hey, you got it up!!!!

Meanie! You just keep replaying my Dean getting killed!!!!
I'm just messing with you, cause I know that would haunt Xander, so you had no choice but to replay it. :)

Poor Dean!! All he wants to do is keep his brothers safe!
And poor Xander, cause he wants the same thing, but he's afraid to be near them!

Keep it up, I need to know what happens next! :)


I tried to review earlier, but the computer kicked me off the internet.

i know, i just keep killing him huh? haha. thank you so much for the review. i dont think dean's gonna be dying anymore, in dreams or in the future. i called in sick to work today so i have all day to work on the conclusion of the chapter.

how's your next chapter going?