Please, oh please, oh please write more!

Interesting so far; I'd love to read more.

This looking like it could be quite interesting. Nice try with the cliffhanger but I don't believe you... some how I have a sneaking suspision that it's going to be poor 'Em' who dies not Buffy. So can't wait see what possible subtle differences earlier on will have on later cannon. Definitely looking forward to your next update.

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I haven't read your story, but I was reading reviews given by ChroniclesBailey and you wrote that you weren't sure how many baths the Summers house had? Well from what I saw it had one it was connected to the hall by a door and Joyce's later Willow's and Tara's room by a door. But than I could be wrong.

Interesting premise can't wait to see how you introduce the Stargate show. Hope you post the next chapter soon.

Okay this story is all kinds of mis representation. Xander Harris and the Dimensional PortKey. I don't know about everyone else but when I see this I think Xander will be the main character and it will have something to do with Harry Potter. When I saw it was Xander and Dawn Centered but Stargate I was a bit thrown and then when Xander was only mentioned once in the first two chapters and Stargate not at all I just thought WTF? Still I can't wait till you actually get to what the story is about.

Nice job.

Okay you are evil! Leaving a cliffie like that. I want to know what happens next quick! Pretty please?

Heh, chapter won't likely be up until tomorrow, but here is a hint: Look at the title of the cliffhanger. Might give you a clue as to who the attacker is. o_-

Well... you got a while to see where it is going, but so far so good. Looking forward to seeing where you might take this.

Oh wow you are terribly cruel... I love it but if you leave us hanging too long I won't find it nearly as amusing and I shall start to chew fingernails, you wouldn't want to be responsible for my chewed fingernails now would you?

cool

Interesting idea, I think I'll do one similar. You know they say imitation is the highest form of flattery?
I encourage you to continue in the endeavor.

good

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Like the look of it.
Looks promising. You did well
Presenting the start.

-[ The premise is not an unfamiliar one. However, you showed it instead of told it. For which I thank you. You let us see the changes partly from the viewpoint of the characters. You didn't just say so-and-so were this or they did that. You gave each detail associated with the characters that slight personal touch. ]-

It starts out easy.
But the long road is scary.
Lets hope for the best.

I suck at haiku. Oh well. Thanks for the sentiment. Will try to keep it up.

Oh, and for you:
http://www.princessserenity.net/agifs/tuxie/tuxietransf.gif

Interesting start.