Review of chapter "Destroy" from
MusicalKillerReview:
I like the encounter with Snape.... he's lying, and alarms are being set off. This sounds not of the good for Snape NOO!! Buffy can't die, not when Anita has nobody left.... But it's not over... is it? Ohh, Faith. =[ And at least Buffy's at peace now.
Comments from author:
Thanks again for following along. Anita still has people in St. Louis to deal with and she might need some help.......
Review By [
MusicalKiller] • Date [15 Sep 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Destroy" from
malenicksReview:
amazing really!, i love it.
Is there going to be a sequel?
I hope so.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. I haven't really thought about what's next. If something comes to me I'll be sure to post it.
Review By [
malenicks] • Date [13 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Discuss" from
MusicalKillerReview:
Hmm, wonder if Snapey's evil?
And I particularly liked the description of Fenrir's demise.
Comments from author:
Glad you're liking it so far. There's probably two more chapters to go before I'm through.
I appreciate the reviews you've been sending since I started this.
Review By [
MusicalKiller] • Date [9 Sep 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Discuss" from
malenicksReview:
hey, wonderful story. I hope you finish it cause I really enjoy reading it.
Comments from author:
Thanks. i appreciate everyone who comments and I'm glad people are actually reading it.
I intended to finish the tale in probably two more chapters.
Hope you enjoy the rest!
Lupo
Review By [
malenicks] • Date [8 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Discover" from
MusicalKillerReview:
'all who hurt mine are going to pay'
-i like that
and Fenrir is gonna die. I almost feel sorry for him. Almost
Comments from author:
Thanks for reading.....I'm glad you like the tale....
Review By [
MusicalKiller] • Date [2 Sep 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Duet" from
LotusjaReview:
WOW!
Review By [
Lotusja] • Date [29 Aug 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Duet" from
dharkcharlotteReview:
Very interesting!
Review By [
dharkcharlotte] • Date [28 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Duet" from
MusicalKillerReview:
Ohh, that's so horrible. Anita had to 'put to death' her own family. And poor Buffy... they've always been her support system, what now?
Review By [
MusicalKiller] • Date [28 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Duet" from
amusewithaviewReview:
This is very strange, in a good way. I like the story so far, but where the hell is Jean-Claude in all this?
Voldie's gonna get his ass whooped.
Danke
Comments from author:
Glad you like it so far. Here's what I'm playing with: Timing of this story is while Anita is avoiding both Richard and JC. I listed it as alternate universe because I'm probably not going to stay strictly true to any of the stories.
I think JC would be devastated at losing Ash for a third time (this time permanently) and he wouldn't really care what is going on right now, later he would have issues, but right now he's probably sitting in his reception room staring at the portrait of himself, Asher and Julianna. He'll be there for a few months or until he starts draining Richard and Anita, so one of them has to go and smack him out of it...............
Just some thoughts
Review By [
amusewithaview] • Date [28 Aug 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Duel" from
MusicalKillerReview:
Wow, this is amazing. And everyone as Inferi? Ouchie. But seriously, I commend you on such a fabulous job.
Review By [
MusicalKiller] • Date [26 Aug 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Duel" from
SlowMercuryReview:
This is a very engaging idea, but I have to say I think Anita would just have shot Buffy and if it had come down to hand to hand, Buffy would probably have won (which is why Anita would have tried to make sure it wouldn't happen that way). I'm also interested to note that ALL of Buffy's family died, whereas Anita still has people she loves left who might have at least tried to keep her grounded (like Jean Claude, Richard and Micah). Very nice start.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the comments. The idea was floating around and I am still not real happy with the outlet. I'm thinking the timing for Buffy is after her resurection as she is trying to forgive her friends. For Anita it would be before Obsidian Butterfly. Antia isn't quite so gun happy at this point, but still has enhanced power (speed, strength, etc.). As far as Anita being grounded, nobody can talk sense to her since she did the torture thing in Blue Moon. This idea would play out better in story format which would allow the background to be fleshed out more, however I am not there yet. Thanks for reading!
Review By [
SlowMercury] • Date [25 Aug 07] • Not Rated