Review of chapter "The Letters" from
willsReview:
Its really a great start can't wait for more!
Review By [
wills] • Date [28 Aug 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Letters" from
BunneyReview:
Your chapters are a little short,but overall you have a beginning so keep going.
Later and Love
Bunney
Review By [
Bunney] • Date [28 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Across the ocean" from
MelliReview:
Interesting start, I can't wait to see where this goes and how it gets there!
Comments from author:
Hey thanks for reviewing. It's nice to know that there are a couple people that like this story. I'm not really sure yet where it's going, but I figure that like the first two chapters, it'll come to me. Thanks again for reviewing.
Review By [
Melli] • Date [27 Aug 07] • Not Rated