Harmony as Emma Forst? Shudder.. I would have the girls dress up as DC superheroes. Cordelia as Wonder Woman, Harmony as Super Girl, and the other two would be Starfire and Raven from Teen Titans.

Yeah, that sorta defeats the purple of a Marvel YAHF then, doesn't it?

OMG! This is so funny!

Fun and funny. Thanks for writing this, hope to see more someday, bye for now.

You never know...

Good Story, I hope you continue it.

Eventually.

Thoroughly enjoyable and well written. Keep up the good work!

After Game On, it's on my to-do list because it's keeping me from doing the sequel to New Day Dawning.

...strictly dickly?

*collapses with laughter*

Holy shit, you're alive? O_O

You did a great job with Cordelia in this. Remind me again who Emma Frost is. Merry Christmas.

HOT HOT HOT! *HUGS*

I try.

The lesbismoochies, I love your adding in the breast angle issue. The thought in that alone is great. *cheers for JoeH*

We love lesbians!

You know, as romantic 'problems' go, an overabundance of breastage is probably one of the more entertaining ones for a hot girl/girl couple to deal with.
^_^

The only nagging thing about this story (other than the whole 'it's Cordelia' thing I've already complained about), is that I'd rather have seen a version of Black Cat with the Luck Manipulation power tossed into the mix. That would have made for some very nifty situations. As it is, Cordy and Kelsey have very similar power sets (Enhanced-Human physicality), other than the super-senses for K and the burglar skills for C.
Which, okay, is enough to play around with, I suppose... I just love the quirky, troublesome powers too, for the added story potential.

Also: the new art is very cute.
Adorable, even.

Well, only the Ultimate Black Cat has had that sort of power for any real amount of time...

Not at all bad. The superhero thing is nicely done, and as other people have said, you really write Cordelia well. My only complaint, and it's very minor, is that it;s a little easy to get confused over who's who with the original cordettes, although I have no doubt that that'll get easier as time goes on.

They're all named after fans of mine. Quick and easy method?

Kelsey = sleeping with Cordelia
Anna = capable of lifting tanks in the air for fun
Cassie = shrinks and grows wings

Just don't go and read Snake Charming if this is hard on you. All three recur as her Cordettes there, with drastically different roles.

Dang! Just when I think you have gone totally perv on us, you do a nice romantic update like this. Well done and quite sweet. Since I am male, I've never thought about the problem of two persons of the female persuasion having anatomy clashes while attempting to kiss. Not only do your write good stuff, it is even educational. Lol!

*bows* I try. :)

Nevermind. I've got my answer to my last review for "New Day Dawning"... and I'll have to read this story as soon as I can.

Whoot. ^_^

Now Harmony can be her own best friend! [/shameless-stealing-of-Whedon-dialogue]

I hate you so hard.

I like Kelsey and her growing relationship with Cordelia. I also like your story. The idea of a Frosted Harmony is a bit scary, but I trust you to make Harmony Frost as strange as all the rest of your cast of characters. Lol! I look forward to more of another of your goofy, involving, and strangely erotic stories.

Frosted Harmony sounds like a very naughty pornographic movie...