This is an excellent answer to the challenge. I like the fact that you used something fairly mundane (something that some people voluntarily chose) but is perfect punishment because it takes away all Parker's slimy fun. And then add that nice little twist of the screw at the end.

Okay your just evil to leave this hanging like this. I love it and think Parker is getting what he so richly deserves. I do feel that the last part was rather evil though, so I must ask is this fic going to be updated/finished?

Oh, now that was mean. Signing Parker up for the AirForce, but I love that he's having such a rough time of it, and Jack...I could definitely see him doing something like that after he managed to track down the man who had hurt his daughter.

The part with Daniel and Jack was great, O'Neill's little shovel speech rocked, and Danny-boy's expression would have been priceless.

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*grinning wickedly from ear to ear* GO JACK!!!!!!!! I am so glad that he followed through on 'dealing' with penis-head Parker, the guy truly deserves that and more. Thanks for the laugh!

Couldn't happen to a more deserving guy! And I love Jack's threat to give Daniel a chance to relive his experiences being stranded with a bonkers Maybourne, should he ever touch Buffy in a carnal way!

Very nice! I like Jack's revenge, and I'm looking forward to your next installment. But poor Jack, if he thinks threatening Daniel will work... neither Daniel nor Buffy has ever been good at following orders.

Excellent!

Oh BRAVO!!!! I love it. Oh it gave me such a good laugh and I was feeling down because I had finished reading the last Stephenie Meyer book that is out so far in the Twilight series. (3 books in 3 days and now I have run out of books to read) But I'm not depressed anymore I am delighted that you took my challenge, and you did such a great job with it too! I love that they used something from another episode of Stargate, and the threat from Jack at the end. I thought the best part was when none of the women on base would give him the time of day. I also love what Daniel put him through.

Thank you so much this really made my day.

I'd love to see more. I can see Jack and his best friend teaching Parker a lesson for playing his daughter.

I was confused by a couple things - how did Jack and Daniel get Parker through the gate? Or did the Keeper give some of the now empty capsules to Earth for research and Jack managed to 'redirect' one of the shipments from Area 51 to Sunnydale instead? What did Daniel to with Buffy that had Jack warning him off?

Another idea for Parker's continuing punishment - a long winded, never ending course in Wormhole Physics by Carter.

Maybe while getting to know his daughter's friends, Jack can get some ideas from Xander (can explain the hardware as a new military application of Virtual training). Xander would have some doozies (every girl Parker tries to score with turns into a mummy at the "peak", a vamped Drusilla having him tied to a bed and pulling out the knives to start playing, some male demon deciding he's the perfect 'pet', etc.). If Jack doesn't know about the Supernatural world, he can just decide Xander's disturbing.

In my first draft I had Jack explaining how they got to the planet, but it seemed more like an explanation to the reader and not something that they would say naturally in a conversation, so I'll show what happened in a later chapter.

The thing that Daniel did: he kissed Buffy right in front of Jack in the story 'The Gift of A Family'. Jack was rather upset about it.

Don't worry, Parker's punishment will be continued, though there will be no including of Xander in this. This is just a side story to FireDragon's TGOAF. I'm not going to add any other characters that would contradict the main story (plus I would never voluntarily include Xander anyway since he annoys me too much).

Not bad as far as revenge goes and it sounds like a good idea, but...

Come on,
if Parker doesn't know WHY he's stuck in that nightmare, then he'll never learn.
Jack can be pretty scary in person.

I think you're overestimating Parker's intelligence, though now I'm thinking of writing a second chapter where you see Parker meets Jack again, though this time when he's sober.

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah.. couldn't you have made it just a wee bit longer and with loads more detail.. i mean while creative it would have been better prolonged.. or at least include a sparring session with Teal'C

I'm actually considering a second chapter where Parker meets an alien for the first time and then screams like a girl... it probably won't be Teal'c though.

An absolutely perfect revenge! Poor, confused Parker. That was really funny.

Parker did deserve to suffer on the show, but since it didn't happen, I was happy to make it happen here. He was just too stupid to survive in Sunnydale.

Sweet, sweet revenge. He deserved it! Jack's creative in handing out the punishment.

Thanks for saying that. This story is the longest thing I've ever written so I wasn't very confident about it.