I hope your muse wakes up soon, I like this peace
Thanks
Dave

"...Anya Jenkins, daughter of Hans and Fritz Jenkins..."

I really like the story...but unless Anya is supposed to be the daughter of a gay couple, at least one of her parents really should have a female name!

Wow. I love this wonderful excellent fic so far (feeding the muse praise) As for your muse not working with you perhaps you need to get into a dialog with you muse and find out what will make him happy so that you can continue this excellent fic. Again I love this fic and hope that you are able to update again soon

Interesting tale, although it seems that I'm missing several parts of the puzzle here and that does detract from the story. Every story seems to set the new watcher's council up in a different manner as well as having different ways for the Scoobies to interact with each other. It held my attention at one sitting for me to read it in its entirety however so... Keep up the good work, I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

I love this fic and I love it even more because it's a Buffy/Xander pairing. Although a little harsh on Sam at times. looking forward to an update.

This is a great story. I really like it. The only thing is I don't see how it's Xander centred.

Most of the scenes are Buffy oriented. Xander hasn't really made any connections.
Buffy met someone on the plane she made a connection to Cassie, met Oz, beat up a car and bought muffins and has actually had a conversation with Carter. It's all Buffy did, Xander’s been there like he's just there for the ride. He hasn't even made his own decisions other than to see Mary Jentry. So it comes across as a Buffy centred story. More than that people are thinking in the direction of if Buffy not Xander.

This isn't a flame btw it's a great story; I like the world you have developed.

Am hopeing for updates!

I was enjoying this story, but you lost me on this last chapter. Slayer's don't kill humans. Buffy reiterated that several times throughout the series. It's just too OOC for me to continue.

Faith's speech/trip down memory lane to Buffy seemed off to me. While I could see her saying something to that effect the voice was wrong for her. Also I have to wonder about the sudden wariness towards Xander, he is the original Scooby and now that they find that his mother, who died and he never met, was a watcher they are suddenly treating him like a paroled convict who they will send right back to jail if he steps a bit out of line.

A good and solid story. I am enjoying it, darker aspects and all. And Kinsey spawn deserve what they get. Especially since she was most likely Kinsey's spy. Carter needs to catch a clue.

sweet

I'm really digging this story, please update soon!

Glad to see this story continued. If it turns out that Jeanie Kinsey has been Goa'ulded like her father, please give her a chance to survive. While the death of an innocent has great dramatic potential, I shudder to think what this would do to Buffy's alreadly fragile emotional state. Maybe Sam could show up at the last second and out the Goa'uld. Could there be Trust connections to the NWC? Or maybe to the Old Council that carried over? This could explain the NID attack on Robin and Faith. There have been so many "coincidences" so far, I'm starting to wonder if the PTB put this whole thing together as a long range plan to protect the Earth from threats on multiple fronts. (No, I'm not paranoid. Who told you that?!?)

happy that this story is being worked on again. I know you;ve got a lot of irons in the fire, and the muse sometimes like to
take vacations, leave of absences, and sometimes they like to mutiny too. Looking forward to more.

Good chapter. Lots of emotion wrapped into a tight little bundle.

Kinda preachy at the end. Otherwise, not bad.