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LaughingCatReview:
This is an excellent story in the making. Do you plan on continuing it?
Comments from author:
I do plan to continue. The muse left me for a while but I have started writing again and a chapter should be forthcoming. Glad you are enjoying it.
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LaughingCat] • Date [25 Nov 08] • Not Rated
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puckishReview:
Oooh! I like this, are you ever gonna finish it?
Review By [
puckish] • Date [15 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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JediKnightReview:
Please add more soon.
Review By [
JediKnight] • Date [14 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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XeeliaReview:
This is such a good story!! Please, please continue it!!!
Review By [
Xeelia] • Date [10 Sep 08] • Not Rated
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kidkiliReview:
Please, Please, Please come back to this. Its utterly brilliant and I've fallen in love.
Review By [
kidkili] • Date [20 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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ChaoskittenReview:
any chance of update-age?
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Chaoskitten] • Date [17 May 08] • Not Rated
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AynotReview:
More, Please! For the love of everything Holy, write more and soon, please!!??!!
Review By [
Aynot] • Date [13 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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meganReview:
I was wondering if you are going to update soon?
Comments from author:
Yes, at this moment I am working on another chapter. Very sorry about the long delay, but I will be coming out with another chapter soon.
Review By [
megan] • Date [6 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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ephonaReview:
it was just getting to the good part. update you know you want too.
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ephona] • Date [12 Mar 08] • Not Rated
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KirallieReview:
So Dawn was Juliana? How will she react to Jean-CLaude and Asher? Keep up the good work! Is it the Knights killing or someone else?
Review By [
Kirallie] • Date [14 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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toowhiteprincessReview:
I know it takes some time to write fanfics but is there going to be more chapters? Please say yes!
Comments from author:
My laptop doesn't have the internet yet, but as soon as it does, I'll be uploading the next chapter. Give me about a month. Sorry to make you wait so long, but thank you for reviewing.
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toowhiteprincess] • Date [10 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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TempeReview:
So I like the story I'm just a little confused on the whole Julianna thing but I'm sure that would be cleared up in future chapters. Also are you going to throw Dawn with one of Anita's guys? If you do I'm really hoping Anita doesn't suddenly become obnoxious and instead turns out to be okay with the situation. Although I'm not into femme slash maybe you could treat it like Anita does with two of her boys in the same room? Hope that made sense.
Comments from author:
Anita isn't obnoxious in the books and that will hold true for my fics. I dislike anything about the AB verse being OC so you will be seeing the same Anita throughout. I'm not going to reveal the pairing just yet but you won't have to wait long.
Review By [
Tempe] • Date [30 Dec 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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PrincessTaiReview:
You've been intricate in developing Dawn and adding minor BtVS/A:ts characters.
I was so happy to see that Con and Dana are chillin' in Cleveland.
I really want to check out the New Council into you have. It seems very, very interesting.
Dawn's life too. She's one step away from being superDawn but in a real sense. Like she could actually do all of it, because she's Dawn and she's stubborn and independent as heck. It's very believeable.
So is Buffy letting her go, but causa Spike and Giles and posting Rona around. Dawn's all growed up so well in this fic. I am just so digging the back story and the glimpse of the past. Kudos again for tying it in all so well, and bringing it forward bit by bit when necessary.
Though I wanna how Giles knows. How does he know about Dawn's destiny?
How does Spike know. Though it makes sense that he would know before everyone else, even Dawn.
Cause he's Giles. And that was a very Giles move, sending her there. Cut the strings. But always does it so abruptly. No softly, softly for Rupes.
You have a quite a way with words. And inner thoughts. Your third person rocks. I just love how you have Dawn explain things it is SO her, >>Mr. I-Should-Have-Been-Mr.-Dawn-Summers.
For example *snickers* I say you and me both Dawnie. Man is all kinds of wonderful when he's chill and not being a jerk about his wolf or some other woe is me thing. I hope in this fic he can calm the hell down. I hope it's Rona. Oh that would have all types of hilarity ensue-ing. :-P
And Micah came to save the day. As usual .. mostly. Yay to that.
Comments from author:
Thank you sooo much for your reviews, I really enjoyed reading them. I will send you the kind of diagram I have on the new Council. I don't plan to explain it in my story because Dawn doesn't really know she has an audience and it would just seem like an inner monologue that I don't need. Also, I probably won't have the new chapter up until the end of january. I'm starting a new job with no computer time, so i need to go buy one. But if you send me your email address I will send you the Council.
Review By [
PrincessTai] • Date [15 Dec 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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PrincessTaiReview:
I really how you do like the connection thing.
I like it when people remember the other scoobs and ai members, even if it's a certain character-centered.
Cause they're family. And only family can get away with calling Giles a manipulative bastard. Ya had me laughing at that one. And if he does pull the puppy dog face ... sorry I'm just giggling like mad thinking about it. But if you do have him do it you should have him do it on someone who is unexpected or isn't a master at it, like 99.9% of the scoobs are. Maybe he'll do it to Anita *laughs* That I'd love to see.
Review By [
PrincessTai] • Date [15 Dec 07] • Not Rated
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PrincessTaiReview:
Ewwwwww. Dawn almost made me gag.
I felt for Faith lol. I was right and I am liking this.
The way you easily slide from memories and the current is making this very enjoyable.
And bringing the Knights as the Villians?
Nice. Will they be with the League?
And I love how you set up that meeting.
Boy is 'nita gonna be shocked! *Snickers*
Review By [
PrincessTai] • Date [15 Dec 07] • Not Rated