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Review of chapter "Silver Linings" from grundy

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Oh, bless! This was such a lovely story, even if I did kill at least a box of Kleenex over the course of it. Is there any chance you might write something of Fred and Dawn before the end of DH, or maybe the little angels/hellions at Hogwarts trying to live up to Dad's memory?

Comments from author:

First I'm writing a prequel about the meeting and eventual getting engaged part of Dawn and Fred's story. Then possibly an alternate version where Dawn saves Fred ... not sure on that one though. Definitely something with the hellions, maybe snapshots of them growing up.
- D

Review By [grundy] • Date [8 Sep 08] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Silver Linings" from Roxssanne

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This is a very good tearjerker... please continue writing good stories. I would like you to make a story sorta like this but with Dawn coming in time to save Fred. I never liked the way that J. K. Rowling killed off Fred and Professor Snape... or Black for that matter. So that's just an idea for a new story...

Comments from author:

Oh that was definitely a plan. I was against the death of Fred as well. He's my favorite character.
- D

Review By [Roxssanne] • Date [4 Sep 08] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Silver Linings" from Keshkreature

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Very beautiful story. I'd love to read the sequel.

Comments from author:

Thank you, that means a lot, but I think I'm going to do a prequel first.
- D

Review By [Keshkreature] • Date [1 Sep 08] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Silver Linings" from (2006%20Donor)

Kiara

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EDIT: In response to your response! Oooh- that sounds fun. And a lot happier x

For some reason, I haven't read this story until now- but I'm very glad I found it. Touching, emotional, sweet and a lovely ending.

I'd be very interested in reading more about the world you've made- perhaps a story or series of ficlets about the 'hellions' taking after their Dad at Hogwarts?

Thanks for sharing,
Kiara x

Comments from author:

I'm glad you read it as well, but I'm even more glad that you told me so. It means a lot.
There very well could be a few shots of the twins at Hogwarts, but first I want to do a short story about how Dawn and Fred originally met, I know I mentioned gringotts, but it could be fun to expand.
- D

Review By [ (2006%20Donor)

Kiara] • Date [31 Aug 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Silver Linings" from Scrappychic

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I thoroughly encourage you to do a prequel and sequel to this story. This is such a great sory, so heart wrenching at times, but still enjoyable. Great Job.

Comments from author:

The prequel will be much less sad, I promise.
- D

Review By [Scrappychic] • Date [31 Aug 08] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Silver Linings" from Skyefather

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*grumbles under his breath as he pays off several bets* great chapter! dawn isn't the only one who's given birth to a beauty. Though in your case it's a fabulous story full of tragedy, love, angst, and a happy ending. the whole story should be up for an award (and will be if I've anything to say about it.) what more can I say -------LOVE IT BABY!!!!!!!!!
Are we close to the end now???????

*Hugs&Kisses*

Comments from author:

... that kind of was the end ....

Review By [Skyefather] • Date [31 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Silver Linings" from chaoskitty

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beautiful.
i loved it.
wonderful indeed.

Comments from author:

Thank you. I've decided to back up a bit and do a short story about how Fred and Dawn met, what Dawn was doing at that time and all that jazz. I think it might be fun.
- D

Review By [chaoskitty] • Date [31 Aug 08] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Heartbreak" from nannabelle

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This chapter made me cry...a sure sign of a great piece of work.

Comments from author:

I'm not sure exactly how tears equate to greatness ..... but I'll take it!!!
- D

Review By [nannabelle] • Date [28 Aug 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Heartbreak" from NaiveGhost

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I like this story (in a sad way).
Keep writing!
;-)

Review By [NaiveGhost] • Date [28 Aug 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Heartbreak" from kizunakat

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I rarly give a 10 but your story and especialy this chapter realy touched my heart. I am crying as I type so keep up the wonderfull writing and I cant wait for more. kizuna

Review By [kizunakat] • Date [27 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Heartbreak" from slmncpm

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oh i HATE YOU! i am bawling all over my keyboard and my glasses have little droplets of tears and i can barely see the damn screen!
having said that.. i still can't wait to read more. are you sure it has to be the last chapter?

Comments from author:

I'm actually thinking of making this the first in a series. Write another one about what would have happened if Dawn snagged a time-turner and changed history, saving Fred. And then a series of one-shots about the twins (where fred died before they were born) growing up. Not sure just yet though.
- D

Review By [slmncpm] • Date [27 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Heartbreak" from chajalive

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My table is wet with tears. This scene was so moving and though I wanted to reread your story, I cannot afford to be too sad today so I will postpone the re-read. Somewhere deep down I do like happy ends, and I would really like to see Dawn somewhat happy again. Her and Charlie?
Someone, please?
Chaja

Comments from author:

I love happy endings too, and the next chapter is .... well it's more bittersweet, but it's good.
- D

Review By [chajalive] • Date [27 Aug 08] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "You Must Go On" from Skyefather

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OK you happy???!!??? you made me cry with this one so you get a rating of ten out of ten from me not many can say that. It's good to see Molly coming out of her funk and Dawn starting to respond again. Still wondering if dawn is pregnant? and how will everyone respond to that? Is she going to make it though the service without breaking down or cracking up? (I can't tell yet.) ok get to work on the next chapter NOW!!!!!!!!!!!

*hugs&Kisses*

Comments from author:

*laughter* you cried? Me too. A lot of others as well. I just finished the next chapter, have to edit it (or if you get to me soon enough I'll let you read the unedited first.) I'm such a tease
- D

Review By [Skyefather] • Date [23 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]

Review of chapter "You Must Go On" from Althalus

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This is a great story.
Your writing is excellent for the emotional parts of the story. You're giving it just the right touch to get emotion from the reader.
I like it and look forward to the rest of the story.

Review By [Althalus] • Date [23 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]

Review of chapter "You Must Go On" from grundy

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Wow. You really should add a warning to this story: "have tissues at hand". This wasn't as heavy as some of the previous chapters have been, but I was still holding back tears. It's good to see Dawn and George starting to heal.

Review By [grundy] • Date [23 Aug 08] • Not Rated