Great story!

If this is set post-OotP then what about the prophecy? What has Voldemort been doing all these years? His plans for power don't seem to have advanced much in that time.

What was Faith's relationship to Voldemort? There was no explanation and her presence was superfluous to the story.

If Voldemort didn't know that Lily was his granddaughter then why did he kidnap her? Will Buffy learn that she killed her father?

What did Harry contribute to regaining Lily? Everything was done by Buffy and the Scoobies. Harry, Ron, and Hermione might have stayed home for all the good they did. Did you intend that disparity?

Did Dumbledore know what was done to Basil Riddle? Has the Ministry fundamentally changed or should the Potters worry that they will come after Voldemort's daughter or granddaughter in the future?

Unless you are doing a follow-on, this story doesn't feel finished.

i love love love it!!! so cute. love the twist to, with jocelyn and bethany. its sad that it ended but the end was really good. :)

That was a wonderful story, I enjoyed it entirely. I think you are a wonderful writer and I hope you continue to put out more stories. Have a happy holiday and a lovely night.

Smile,
Macala A.

I enjoyed this story. Thank you for writing and sharing it with all of us :)

Buffy lived! YES!!!!!!!!!!! Thank you thank-you!!!!!!!!! I SOOOOO didn't like the idea of her being dead again. I love this fic I think it's wonderful and plan to reread this fic again sometime soon. I look forward to reading more of your work.

That last sentence made no sense "Her lips got wide as she fell into darkness" Huh? shouldn't it have been her eye's? Was Giles trying to tell Tom (can't spell the other name) that Buffy was there sister? I don't like the fact that you killed Buffy that is just to mean! I want more soon please I still love this wonderful fic. Again more soon please.

Her lips grew wider as she fell into darkness. - as in her smile widened.
Lol, no, Buffy as Tom's daughter. That would just be too weird and wacky if Buffy was Giles' sister!
Haha, I remember thinking that that was going to be it when I wrote this and that I could make a future future fic when Lilia is older and Buffy suddenly comes back to life... but alas, I decided to change it! :P
Thanks for the review!

Well I've just read all thirteen chapters in one sitting and I've got to say that I'm loving your story so far. This is easily one of the better, not to mention unique, crossovers I've personally come across =)
I think you've done an excellent job writing the characters and have thrown in some really nice plot twists too, especially in this latest chapter.
The only thing I'd like to see is maybe not have Harry come across as being so... useless and wimpy-ish. That's the only thing close to constructive criticism I could hope to offer you because, to be honest, I think you've gotten everything else pretty much spot on.
I look forward to your updates, keep up the great work! =)

I don't think it was cheesy at all, I absolutely loved it. I hope Buffy makes it out some how. Keep up the great work and have a lovely day.

Smile,
Macala A.

Wow!! talk about joss whedon's infamous 'plot twist'!!! "it's bethany, tommy, it's bethany!" i thought you threw me for a loop with the giles being voldemort's brother but . . . wow!!! great chapter, can't wait to find out who bethany is!!!!!

Wow, so Buffy is Voldemort's daughter? Or did I not read all that right. Great chappy! Can't wait to read the next one :)

WOW! What a way to tell your spouse the truth. Was Faith under a cruse/spell? I am very eager to read more of the next part of this fic.

Ooohh, great update! Finally, they each kind of find out about the other!! I can't wait to read the next chapter :)

awesome!!! can't wait to see buffy's reaction to faith's involvement, and i hope buffy/xander/willow/giles save harry/ron/hermione!!!!!!!!!

Great update! I keep waiting for the chapter where Harry and Buffy realize that the other isn't exactly who they always thought they were. And then you go and leave us with a cliffy. I can't wait to read the next chapter!! :)