Review of chapter "Making It Better" from
JadedRavenReview:
Okay, so this made me cry. But that could be because of the fact that I'm listening to "Remember Me This Way" (from Caspar) and gah, it just...it hit me.
Good job. I love it.
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JadedRaven] • Date [10 Oct 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Making It Better" from
KnightOwlReview:
I really like the way yours went more than the show, especially because it had Dean in it. I like the way he is happy for having her back but feels guilty for it because she is so unhappy. He makes her let out some of her anger by making her tell him that she is angry with her friends. Everything she said made sense, they didn't care that she could have come back all wrong. I especially like the end where Dean makes her break the headstone, that was a good idea.
Comments from author:
I definitely thought that he'd be torn about her coming back so I'm glad you liked it and all the rest. :) And yay for liking the breaking of the headstone (for the life of me, I couldn't remember that word when I was writing it, lol). Thank you!
Review By [
KnightOwl] • Date [30 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Making It Better" from
exiledReview:
Good story.
I thought it was set after Willow's Chosen spell and not the Buffy back spell. It caused a few moments of disconnect because I thought the roof she was on was the bus.
I loved the emotion and how you had Dean not being an idiot. How he was comforting to Buffy and just held her. That's what she really need when she came back.
Thank you for sharing your vision and talent.
Comments from author:
You know, it never even occurred to me that someone might think it was after Chosen. Still, I'm very glad that you enjoyed it anyway. :) Thanks!
Review By [
exiled] • Date [30 Sep 07] • Not Rated
