Absolutely loved it!
There are not enough really good, convincing Buffy/Will crossovers.I was up until 230 this morning reading it, I could not stop despite having a psych paper due!
I can't wait to read the sequel, keep up the great work it's really appreciated.
Happy writing :-)

Very awesome fic! I'm not usually into PotC crossovers, but yours was beautifully written, and your love story was truely poignant.

Thank you. I try. I'm just glad I didn't truly destroy the story. I'm currently working on the sequel and intend to follow Buffy and Will's life and other things up until and past the end of season seven of Buffy. The idea of watching them grow and change appeals to me. And eventually I'm going to write a fic that is just Buffy and Jack and some of their adventures that happened before the movie.



Again thanks for the review. It's good to know that I haven't destroyed the spirit of two great franchises.

Aden

First off i can't begin to say how much i love the fact that you have more teague in your story than is in the movie. his character is so cool to me.

second.....jack knows about the slayer........i'm guessing that is going to be a factor in later stories......just like i'm thinking the fact that will can feel buffy will.

i'm not sure what I love about this chapter more.....seeing buffy being the smart one and manipulator and everyone else following her lead or the wedding.

because that wedding is honestly better than the one in the movie.

but then again i found it incredibly unbelievealbe that will would have just forgiven elizabeth like that.

I find myself wonering why everyone in the art but buffy looks so shocked.

i don't know if I'm the only one that noticed that you named the dog Keith.......which i find so funny because keith richrds plays teague.

how you manage to intergrate the movies origional dialogue with your own and still keep the characters so true is amazing to me.

and that you can do serious and funny in one chaper and still have it work so well

But their peaceful silence had melted when they had heard fighting up on deck and Buffy had gotten up and left mumbling something about a Xander and Cordelia, broom closets and freaky wrong sex. Elizabeth had continued to sit but had smiled when she heard Buffy's voice cutting though the air yelling at the two of them and then twin muffled thumping noises of bodies hitting the deck.




i love the idea of buffy smacking jack and barbossa around. i just wish you'd written the scene.

She set it on the table with a thunk and then paused before reaching down the back of her pants and removing one of the largest pistols Will had ever seen. At the sight Will's eyes widened in shock, his own expression mirrored by Barbossa as Will wondered how on earth Elizabeth had managed to hide such a weapon on her body. A wonder that Barbossa appeared to have as well as he tilted his body to attempt to figure out what Will wanted to know. Elizabeth placed the large pistol on the table with the now mountain of weapons and returned to face the guard, her expressions clearly asking “What?” as though what they had just witnessed were a common thing. Will had the sinking suspicion that Elizabeth had learned how to hide weapons so well from Buffy and he made a note in his mind to ask Buffy exactly how to she and Elizabeth managed to do it.



I so want to know how they do it too.

tension and humor in one chapter......that's why i love this story.

and buffy has her usual reaction to males. not surprising.

“Were you drunk, insane or brain damaged? Maybe all of the above?”

another one of my favorite lines.


and btw I love your ability to match music to stories. some of it is so diverse......kinda makes me want to see what cd's you own.

slayer logic and a pirate's moral code.......that's a dangerous combination

“Do you not fear death?” he asked her, his head cocked to one side reminding her of a bird's

“No.” Buffy stated flatly before ignoring the pain it caused and cocking her head as well before replying. “Do you?”




“I know you have questions.” she said evasively.

“That's why I asked them.”



those are still two of my favorite lines.

still good the second time around.....or is it the third now? i can't remember.