Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
dallalReview:
God, this site is hard to register on!!!!
Anyway, crossovers are a tough job but Buffy is such a good show to match with Supernatural...makes such sense. I like that you went with Willow and Dean...she's like the female Sam LOL He needs someone like that. Him and Buffy could be demolition experts but doubt they'd last too long...good stuff!!!
Comments from author:
Sorry, still trying to breathe after "demolition experts"!!!
Yeah, they like to make sure you're not some kind of Charmed fan or something :-)
Glad you're liking it, not as... out there as your work, but then what is?
Review By [
dallal] • Date [22 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
MichelleWinchesterReview:
Damn it Dean! Get in your Impala and go after her!
Comments from author:
I'm working on a sequel right now that will deal with how they met, and their reunion. Thank you for the review, it made my day!
Review By [
MichelleWinchester] • Date [15 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
KaylaShayReview:
You jumped us right into their relationship without introduction, but managed to make me hurt for Dean and the thought of losing the woman he had built a life with. That's a hard thing to do, so good job! Most times I don't like jarring into established relationships right in the middle of a fight, but this I liked.
The emotions Dean was working through were nicely captured. I was right there with him in wanting to either grab Willow and keep her there, or take off with her to whatever battle she was going to face.
Loved the little touches to their life that you mentioned from the photographs to the rug. Little things like that make the characters who we know them to be. Especially since I got the hint that Dean wasn't to happy about having to take that photo that sent out at Christmas... that's Dean as we know him.
Anywho, I liked the setup for this angsty little piece and it works well as a one-shot glimpse into their combined world, but I would mind seeing more.
PS: check your email for more... ;-)
Comments from author:
Woo-Hoo!
Thank you for the review, and for replying so promptly. I'm also grateful for the e-mail extras, anything that makes the story more coherent is always appreciated.
Thanks also for the happy review, it means a lot to me. I normally don't like jumping right into a relationship either, but this story jumped in and wouldn't leave. The rug and the photos were my favorite parts to write, it seemed to fit with who they are; that and the two of them fighting gives me the belly rumblings.
Thanks again, and I do have a thought about a continuing story...
Review By [
KaylaShay] • Date [23 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
EsheReview:
Great story, I'm always in the mood for Willow/Dean goodness, maybe you should write some more, I can't be the only one adding stories here!!!
But I love your descriptions of emotion and I think you captured them both wonderfully.
Review By [
Eshe] • Date [3 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
EsheReview:
Great story, I'm always in the mood for Willow/Dean goodness, maybe you should write some more, I can't be the only one adding stories here!!!
But I love your descriptions of emotion and I think you captured them both wonderfully.
Comments from author:
Thank you so much!
This is the first fic I've ever posted, and afterwards I had to go outside and hyperventilate for a few minutes : )
I was so nervous, but reviews make all things better, so thanks again
Review By [
Eshe] • Date [3 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
RedReview:
He has to go get Willow, and tell her that he loves her.
Comments from author:
Thank you so much for reviewing : )
I am thinking about writing a prequel and/or a sequel. My beta's have requested them, but I wasn't sure if I should, so thank you for the encouragement.
Review By [
Red] • Date [1 Oct 07] • Not Rated