Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
HappyMumbleReview:
Very cute story :)
Hehe like the way crookshanks rescued :D
Review By [
HappyMumble] • Date [2 Jan 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
cflatReview:
Cute.
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [
cflat] • Date [3 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
BlueScreenReview:
lol,
caused me to chuckle.
Has Crookshanks been spending too much time around Harry Potter? And gained a Saving kitten thing?
BlueScreen
Comments from author:
Yes! Imagine spending year after year with Harry Potter. Some of his 'good' trait gets pass down to Crookshanks.
Review By [
BlueScreen] • Date [3 Oct 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
KiwikatipoReview:
That was a sweet story and a clever idea on blending Clem and Crookshanks.
Next time watch your tenses, is English your second language? Either put the whole story in past tense or present.
I prefer to read stories in the past tense personally.
Comments from author:
Yes, English is my second language. I've only been learning it 2 years ago. Thank you so much for your review.
Review By [
Kiwikatipo] • Date [3 Oct 07] • Not Rated
