Review of chapter "Prologue" from
TentreesReview:
MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!
Review By [
Tentrees] • Date [22 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 20" from
FighterReview:
Great story, just found it and is already a favorite. I can't wait to read more, I hope to soon. Great job.
Review By [
Fighter] • Date [26 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 20" from
MorithilReview:
Excellent story. Read all 20 chapters in one sitting and found myself disappointed when I reached the last one. Definitely looking forward to more!
Review By [
Morithil] • Date [26 Jun 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 20" from
SeekerSidheReview:
Very enjoyable. I really like Brethany, her personality is so fun.
Can't wait for more.
Review By [
SeekerSidhe] • Date [26 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 20" from
JaderReview:
Unspeakables? Interesting. Just as the whole vampire thing was beginning to cause me to lose interest, you pulled me back in with that last paragraph. I hope to see the next chapter soon.
Review By [
Jader] • Date [26 Jun 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nineteen" from
awandererReview:
Surprisingly good. A few errors in spelling but a story being well told.
NTP
Review By [
awanderer] • Date [7 Jun 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nineteen" from
wonderbeReview:
Very good, and fun to get a glimpse of the vampire lifestyle in this part of the world, and looking forward to what all this means next, when the students arrive, as well as how wrong things might go for them.
Review By [
wonderbe] • Date [3 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from
halfbloodpuffskinReview:
O joy! O bliss! O Rapture Supreme!
It's so nice to see Sev so put down
When he whines, moans and rages with a loud scream
With the "Please, shut up" received with a frown.
Of course, that being said
I hope it's apparent to you
That, if they DO end up dead
this will be my last such review!
And now that I've butchered this rhyme
And iambic pentameter be damned
I do believe that it is time
To be the one who has scrammed
Review By [
halfbloodpuffskin] • Date [15 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen" from
RaghleReview:
I love the witty and intelligent debate between Brethany and Severus. A well written, light hearted and humourous tale, I cannot wait for more.
Keep up the fantastic ideas!
Review By [
Raghle] • Date [21 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from
FerferReview:
Very cute story. I love the interactions with Snape. Looking forward to more soon!
Review By [
Ferfer] • Date [15 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from
SpecksReview:
What at delightful story. Bethany is so alive on the page. I enjoy her and Snape's interludes. Can't wait to see how this develops. Great job!
Review By [
Specks] • Date [15 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from
EmeraldiceusReview:
Awesome Story! I love it. I've always wanted to see someone like Brethany. I absolutely love her character!
Review By [
Emeraldiceus] • Date [16 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from
NaiveGhostReview:
I like it. I love how prejudice the "good" people are. Can't wait for the field trip.
Keep writing!
;-)
Review By [
NaiveGhost] • Date [17 Oct 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "An Interlude Into the Workings of Gossip" from
NaiveGhostReview:
I like it!
I loved the last chapter.
Keep Writing!
;-)
Review By [
NaiveGhost] • Date [9 Oct 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from
LemonsReview:
Love it!!!!
Please continue-im quite curios as to what happens next!
Review By [
Lemons] • Date [5 Oct 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]