I love what you have so far. I think that this is wonderful. Please please please update again soon.

a very nice fic. i hope there will be more of it

This is a start to a great story. Keep up the good work and I hope you will update again soon. ^_^

Ooooh, interesting... I look forwards to your next date. I'm intrigued to see what you do with this.

Oooohh. Excellent addition. I really hope you get time and inspiration to write the next part. :)

I'm delighted that you're continuing with this! Can't wait to read more, whenever you're able to post.

Happy to see an update as this story is really interesting. You did a good job in this chapter running us through Xander's thinking, and justifying why he gave so much info away previously. You also do a great job conveying Xander & Dawn's exhaustion, the end-of-world weariness. Its also quite smart of Xander to be thinking ahead & considering if they need to get out without permission & using the goofy-Xander mask for a cover when needed. I do hope those pesky employers, imagine expecting us to work so much for that paycheck, allow some writing time occasionally. Regardless I'll read when more arrives, no matter the wait.

Great start, I like the way the story is going.

I am enjoying this fic a lot. I have to wonder if perhaps the woman Xander sees is the ghost of Janet, or some other spirit. Wouldn't surprise me if being the one who sees also translates to the one who sees ghosts. Looking forward to the next bit.

nice

A very nice chapter here, especially with the way Xander is already thinking about the possible necessity of leaving with or without their hosts' agreement.

Was the shadowy figure behind him Buffy's, Willow's, Faith's or the First Slayer's spirit that traveled through the portal with them? Remember the Joining Spell from freshman year merged all four of the Scoobies, so the First Slayer might still have a connection to Xander and followed along behind him as they went through the portal, especially if Faith had already been killed at that point in time, and the First Slayer recognized the Ori for the evil that they are.

You've got me quite interested in seeing what's coming next.

Write fast, please. ;-)

So who was behind Xander in the bathroom. I can't see him imagining things

This is nice; well thought out, with just enough explanation. Please update soon, I wanna know what comes next! love xx Shezzi

This looks like a really interesting fic, I hope to see more of it soon.

Cool!