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ScrappychicReview:
I can just see it now. Xander and Daniel talking in one corner while Anya and Vala discuss the difference between sex with Humans vs sex with men of other worlds/Demon species.
Again, any chance in an update on this. It's very promising and I'd love to read more.
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Scrappychic] • Date [23 Nov 08] • Not Rated
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springReview:
So far so good please update again
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spring] • Date [3 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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AngusHReview:
Great story, it's got lots of clever touches. Giving Daniel a commision was an interesting thing to do, I always did wonder how he fitted into the org chart, given he was both a civilian and went on missions too.
I'd be interested in reading more of this should you decide to continue it.
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AngusH] • Date [7 Sep 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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ScrappychicReview:
I asked a few months ago, but any chance of this getting updated? It's a really good idea and has a lot of promise.
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Scrappychic] • Date [30 Aug 08] • Not Rated
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angelkittyReview:
this is a great story but i was wondering if you are going to write more for it
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angelkitty] • Date [11 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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KynnReview:
I'm really liking this story as it stands so far. I hope that you continue write further chapters for this story as well. It's a shame when good stories stop updating. I like how you've worked the family bit out between the Jacksons and Harris'. That was an new idea I haven't run across before. I look forward to reading further updates.
Thanks for the read,
Kynn.
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Kynn] • Date [10 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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ScrappychicReview:
Interesting.
It's been a while, any chance an update is coming any time soon?
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Scrappychic] • Date [23 Feb 08] • Not Rated
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stardustcreationsReview:
Very interesting start. I hope you keep writing.
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stardustcreations] • Date [10 Feb 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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dugleikooReview:
I like it, quick note: where does this fit into buffy timeline?
Oh, and update...please?
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dugleikoo] • Date [1 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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zafaranReview:
More, please. I just reread what's here, and do hope you'll get a chance to post more chapters sometime soon. Daniel should get along quite well with Xander since he is quite a bit like Jack. I hope your schedule and muse will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm
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zafaran] • Date [15 Jan 08] • Not Rated
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manicReview:
Somehow I don't think Daniel would take to being drafted into the military, regardless of how much a soldier he had become. However, I can roll with it ;) I love the recon idea and can't wait for more.
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manic] • Date [3 Dec 07] • Not Rated
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manicReview:
Absolutely loving the fic. Loved kiddie prison and lou coming to rought up the annoying FBI man. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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manic] • Date [2 Dec 07] • Not Rated
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manicReview:
Holy Crap! What a bombshell!
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manic] • Date [2 Dec 07] • Not Rated
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rockyReview:
Liked your other fic so read this one, not quite there yet, but well on it's way. I am looking foreword to the next chapter and Xander and Danny brothers? That's is strange
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rocky] • Date [29 Oct 07] • Not Rated
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AnnadelReview:
Sorry to confuse you. Pern stands for Parallels Earth Resources Negligible and is used to name the planet upon which Anne McCaffrey's main series, The Dragon Riders of Pern, is set. I saw the name and mistakenly thought you were implying Landry disappeared while on a mission to Pern.
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Annadel] • Date [18 Oct 07] • Not Rated
