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ArekanderuReview:
I am not really a fan of Harry Potter but this has big potential. Good work
Comments from author:
Thanks!
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Arekanderu] • Date [23 Dec 07] • Not Rated
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BlameyFomorriiReview:
Found this story by accident, but it's great! Reminds me of Xander's love spell gone wrong.
More please!
Comments from author:
Ooh, thanks! I was aiming for something like that!
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BlameyFomorrii] • Date [17 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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RachelKReview:
I like the set-up. Worth continuing (not necesarily with a relationship), but with Connor discovering number 12, or seeing Willow go in to talk to them. or something. She'd have to know about other magical signatures in the area, right?
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RachelK] • Date [9 Oct 07] • Not Rated
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WhiteWolfReview:
I thought the crazy b**** had the hots for the Snake.
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WhiteWolf] • Date [9 Oct 07] • Not Rated
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purrfusReview:
Okay - creepy is right.
That said the background is interesting and the writing well done.
More Conner in this setting would be good, even if you can't figure out a way to make that particular brunette work out.
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purrfus] • Date [8 Oct 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]