Coolness. Wouldn't mind in the least seeing this turn into a series of short stories or vignettes. ;-)

I'm actually considering it ... just trying to find my muse ::muttering, looking under desk and couch:: Coulda sworn she was just here a minute ago. ::grin::

I like this and would enjoy reading more of Pyro!Xander. If you do write more, I'd suggest renaming the story, since the "witch" part was pretty much over in the first chapter. It would be interesting to see if his powers increase if he stretched them by using it more in a targeted fashion to help him against demons, etc. Are his powers mystical or psychic?

The first chapter was good, but the second made for such a nicely wrapped package. It filled in all the little holes that were peeking through. Thank you for adding it on. I would enjoy reading more, if your muse is so inclined. =]

Well, that certainly does a wonderful job of rounding things out and making this a full feeling story. Answers a lot of the questions that were feeling a bit hanging from the last chapter. Thank you so much for writing and adding this part. I enjoyed it a great deal.

thank you for sharing,
keep penning,
Marns
~pobody's Nerfect

Thanks for being so supportive - in my own head, the first chapter made perfect sense. It wasn't until people started to review that I realized that - oops! no one else knows what I was thinking.
Thanks again.

love it wil they be more

I liked it but felt it just wasn't complete. Need so much more. Pretty please??

Ooo could I have some more please? Lots of potential here.

Hmm I liked this a lot but I have to say it didn't feel complete - I mean it didn't feel like you explained everything that you wanted to explain.

Why in your Author notes you said it was inspired by the book burning in the one ep and the house burning in the other - yeah they both happened around Xander - but you didn't really make me feel that Xander knew that he was doing it, or even have an inkling that he might be the cause. There is a good basis there and I can see where you started to make the connection with the note and the story - but you never followed through.

I did really like the interaction between Amy and Xander and how he helped her get out and to her father's care - that part on that level felt very complete and was very nicely done. :)

keep penning,
Marns
~pobody's Nerfect