This is a great story, I hope you haven't abandoned it!

I am beginning to wonder if you have died cause you have an amazing story and it took you a year to put out one new chapter. please update or at least show you are not dead by saying something.

Great story! It's been a few months since you last updated and I can't wait for the next chapter!

Rhyming reviews? Have I missed some news? I don't know about this? What have I missed?

Okay, that's sad, but really I have no idea about this rhyming thing.

But I was reviewing anyways so i gave it a shot.

More please!

Rhyming review day is an annual custom here at TTH.

I shamelessly updated with a new chapter with some interesting tidbits but no real plot in a shameless attempt to nab some rhyming reviews.

Great start to a story series. The idea of the 'Daler Grapevine and them being recruited for "eyes open, mouths shut" posts is very intriguing. But the people who were aware are only a small portion of Sunnydale residents and former residents. What happens those who stubbornly deny the reality in their conscious minds, while sub-consciously following the rules?

I would like to see more of this series. Maybe a nice 400k-word novel? :-)

By the way, If I Recall Correctly, the Initiative took 100% casualties, 40% fatalities. Casualties include Wounded, Missing, and Killed in Action. (Wounded includes scratches where you have to get an official band-aid.)

good series hope you continue.

wow, really interesting:) hope more come soon:D

love it! I can totally see the sunnydalers getting together to mourn one of their own and being in high risk situations.

Moremoremoremoremore!

This looks like and intersting story I hope you continue soon thx for posting

And when in the Buffy verse does this take place it sounds like they think she is dead?

OK, no rhyming, but the first chapter was so intriguing that I have to tell you:

WRITE WRITE WRITE!

Your approach to the BTVS/Stargate crossover is just great, and it would be a shame to let something so original be mouldering away.

:)


OK, other approach. Pretty please with a cherry on top? I promise to read and read and read!

I really liked the chapter (first)
and wondered when Sam's mind would burst.
Nice to see new OCs from storied 'Dale
so many present: hearty, hale.
I wonder where this fic will go
and hope you will soon let us know.
My little review is now done
and I leave you (thankfully) without a pun.

Maybourne from Sunnydale is quite nifty,
even though he's rather shifty.
I have to say "I can't wait to see
What else in this story will come to be."

I reluctantly concede
to rhyme a review
to the fic I like to read
I would love it if this fic grew
for the concept is solid and interesting
and I wish to see what Maybourne is scheming.

No mention of Xander who trained the crew, just before the bill for graduation became due?