Heh. Good stuff. Keep it up.

please please please please update soon :( i need another fix!

Woohoo!! I was so thrilled to see that you had posted more of this! I adore this story and will try to be patient waiting for more. I really like how well you have managed to keep the time line of events stable, while crossing over some seriously complicated characters. Also, Dawn and Tim...way too cute.:)

It's not crap. I like them. I so want an outburst from Dawn about what Buffy did. It was too stupid, the trap was too predictable (like in the TV show) and people were endangered.

Hope to read you soon !!

Not a bad chapter, but I think the Bruce thign was bad, Batman has fought people like Bane, and Killer Croc, compred to them, Caleb is nothing. I mean he's strong, BUT nto as strong as Bane or maybe as storng as Killer croc. The point is, he wouldnt' be stupid enough or rookie enoguht to get bshed into a wall. Caleb ws a threat because he foguht with power, soemthgin the slayers were used ot fighting with and his overshadowed theirs. HOWEvER Bruce is used to fightign beings stronger than him.

Nice, though the chapter is not as long as usual (you spoil us). Just one thing I want you to keep in mind when we get to the 'lets throw Buffy out' scenes.

Giles had *never* trained Buffy to be a *General* leading an army.

Sure the Scoobies have all worked together but when there was any 'formal' training done Giles always focused on Buffy as a lone individual, not as a member or in charge of a combat unit. Not that she didn't make mistakes, she just didn't have the right training to lead an army.

I'm hoping that Dawn, after all the training she's had with the Bat Clan & the Titan's will realize that & be able to make everyone (including Buffy) realize it to.

Actually, the two scenes with Andrew and Spike are separated with a dashed line so we have to assume that the next section is later on.

Nicely done, but I was so hoping that Xander wouldn't need to be blinded in one eye. I never liked that aspect of the show...

James

A good, albeit short, chapter. I just wanted to point one thing out (it's something that I've done in the past as well)- Early in the chapter you say that Andrew and Spike had been sent away by Giles on their mission. A couple of paragraphs later, Dawn moves to stand next to Spike, and during the mission, while at the house, Andrew was being annoying. Just wanted to point that out.

Other than that, it was great to have a new chapter. Hope you get the next one out soon as well.

Not crap.The story is good.

Awesome! Update soon. I so hate waiting.

YAY, new chapter.

::Gives the plot bunny some chocolate carrot quiche::

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Good chap, just had to point out that Andrew did a houdini and appeared in two places at once. Will like to see how the aftermath plays out now. Wondering if Buffy will get kicked out of the house now...

lol...i'm not too sure how its going to happen either! I've been thinking about yes or no, but i'm still undecided!

I absolutely love this story. I just discovered it today and couldn't stop reading. It's brilliant!

I'm sure if it wasn't 1:23 AM I'd write a more lengthy review, but suffice it to say--please, more.

I just read this whole story in two days and I love it ! I seriously want more of it ! There is more coming soon right?
You crossed these two universes beautifully!

More words in chapter form Hooray! I continue to enjoy this story, and really really hope you make it to the end pretty pretty please ^_^