This is absolutely brilliant.

I adore your Rodney - and most of all Chapter 7. Ronon is also wonderful, particularly his Ch.7 threat to pour gravy down Teyla's through should she ever mention the word "carbs".

I'm starting to completely despair that this won't be finished, ever. You left it at such a cliffhanger, it's painful. Please, please continue. Or put it up for adoption, I'm willing. Or better yet, write more! Just don't abandon us, please?

p.s. I took one point off the rating for cruelty. :P

Great story! Eagerly anticipating the next part. :-)

This is so good!! Please write more? ^_^

Oh, no, you're not leaving us there, darnit! Come on, I wanna hear Spike's explanation and jaw-drops when Sheppard finds out his sister isn't real and is the Key! So update soon please!!!

Whimper. You can't stop there! You've added in so many twists and turns I still don't know what's going on, much less be able to predict where you're going. That's spike, isn't it, who just came through. And Riley doesn't remember Dawn...or does he? He remembers Buffy...Who called Dawn into that universe? This is a very, very awesome story. I love it. Thanks for writing and sharing.

Hey there, I'm a big fan of this story, so i was wondering if and when you were going to finish it. I must say that I am really looking forward to the whole Spike/Riley fight (please let there be a fight) when it occurs. Keep up the good work.

Oh god please please PLEASE update this soon. I can't believe how much I'm enjoying this story. Atlantis has never read so good!

NO! I need more! Post MORE!

This have may already been mentioned, but at some point during the SGA series, Sheppard's brother, whose name I don't know, was introduced and portrayed by Dylan Neal (Dawson's Creek) Just Thought you should know.

Excellent - really enjoyed this one, please continue asap - I can't cope with any more excellent stories that are truncated in their prime !!!!!!

Update please, I am getting tired of rereading without finding out how it continues. This is a great story, it would be a shame to leave it unfinished.
Chaja

oh wow - just found this fic today and read it in a oner. excellent but you can't end it there. i neeed to know what happens.

Hey there, I just wanted to say that I read this story again and I was wondering if you were going to continue it any time soon. I am really looking forward to the Riley/Spike scene and the whole explanation of who and what Dawn is. Keep up the good work and update soon!

Love it, can't wait for the next update. . . . .

Love the Riley twist, and am guessing its likely to be Spike (since he's the person in Dawns dream/memories)

Also, you have done good (by people with PTSD) by recognizing that high stress situations does affect people and that sleep disturbances are one of the signs (especially if it involves flashbacks)

Chaos (who is now being plagued by yet another plotbunny and who can't lately sleep because of her own nightmares) *grumbles*