Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
InfinixReview:
This is story seems like it could be very cool and while there are problems inherent with any main character previously being immortal, Giles and to a lesser extent Joyce are probably easiest to do it with. (I'm sorry but any story with Xander, Willow or especially Buffy being ancient uber immortals is going to be fighting an uphill battle just me to be getting any enjoyment out of it.)
Comments from author:
Thanks. It is true that Giles and Joyce are easier to explain as immortals than any of the Scooby Gang (Unless they become immortal during the show.) the only other one that would come to mind is Jenny.
Review By [
Infinix] • Date [21 Oct 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
RachelKReview:
Some interesting twists!
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [
RachelK] • Date [20 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
JewelReview:
Interesting start. Be nice to see how things change from canon with these two interfering... And how well (or not) they hide it from the kids.
Comments from author:
As I said not sure if I will write more! Well for starters I would think the first thing Buffy would think is that they were dating and freak, remember how she was when she found out about the band candy sex. lol. Anyway we will see what happens with this one.
Blessings
Dave.
Review By [
Jewel] • Date [19 Oct 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
DragonelfReview:
I am already looking forward to read many more chapters.
::Feeds the plot bunny::
Comments from author:
Thanks. But like I said in my notes I am not sure if there will be more! Mean of me I know but we will have to wait and see if my muse get inspired to write more.
Blessings
Dave.
Review By [
Dragonelf] • Date [19 Oct 07] • Not Rated
