Loved thiswhole story.
I definately like the Faith/Severus pairing in this story.

Amazing- I have never been able to see Snape as an attractive person. All of the other stories I started reading that had him as romantic partner just left me cold. However, wow, when you wrote the ..(flirting.. just isn't really strong enough) scenes when Faith is propositioning/groping Snape there was real hotness. I loved it. The angst you showed in each of them was very moving and true to what I know of the characters, I also, would like to see a sequel set awhile later, Snape mixing with the Scoobies could be so much fun. Another excellent story, going outside your comfort zone can be disturbing, but you can prove to yourself that you can do it. Thank you, I'm always glad to see any of your stories.

But... but... but.... no! WANT MORE!!! *cries*

-Tamora, the Cardboard Moon

Awww. I may come back to it later, but for right now, they both have their own responsibilities and their own guilt.

Wonderful story. Faith and Snape's parting was sad, full on longing and wistfulness for something they both want but couldn't have for one reason or another. What I like most about this story was even though there was an attraction between them, what kept the two apart was less about their current situation and more about who they were. I kept thinking that they could make it work despite the risk but both characters seemed convince that happiness doesn't exist for people like them. This was a wonderful pairing and you wrote it so well that now you have me wondering why there hasn't been more stories with this paring. This was truly inspirational and I hope to see more stories of this nature. Great job!

I'm so glad you enjoyed the story. I definitely wanted to give them a moment of happiness, but both of them are too dedicated to their causes to ever pick happiness over completing their mission. They feel responsible, and Faith is far enough along her path that she would switch worlds, but she won't put more people in danger just for her own pleasure, and if Voldemort caught her, then lots of people would be in danger. I'm just so glad I could help you see/like this pairing because I adore the thought of Severus and Faith together.

This was excellent. A friend sent me the link for this, and I almost ignored it-my few experiences reading fan-fiction haven't been what you'd call positive. But you captured Faith's voice very well and you managed to find a perfect story that works in both worlds. Also liked the usage of Riley, and let's face it-it's always good fun when Bellatrix gets her ass kicked, and even better when Faith is the one doing the ass-kicking. Really, very nice job.

You're an excellent writer-I'll have to keep an eye out for your other stuff.

Thank you so much. I did have a lot of fun putting Faith and Severus into the same space and watching all those sharp edges collide, so I'm very glad that you enjoyed it and that the story felt respectful of the two canons I was using. And yes, Bellatrix needs her ass kicked more often.

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I liked this story very much. So much so that I'm saving it to disk, and considering converting it to ebook for future rereading on my PDA. Any chance of getting a sequel to this to find out what happens when the future gets to the point that Severus can use the amulet to contact Willow? I hope your schedule and muse will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm

I certainly am considering a sequel where Snape calls after being bitten. After all, Willow can pull him through and heal him after the snake bite, although I dare say he would have something to say about the way she would do it. In fact, I dare say he would have a lot to say, and very little of it would be the gratitude she would expect. I'm really glad you enjoyed this.

Yep, you gotta do the sequel wherein Snape uses the amulet right there when he believes that he is dying/dead from Nagini's bite. It would be so funny to have him snarking at Willow and her "willy-nilly" approach to trying out new spells and such. He could teach her a lot, and I'm sure that neither of them would admit to (at least somewhat) enjoying the experience.

Even if I never get around to writing it, I'll admit that I will always assume Snape used it and came through to the Buffy universe after getting bit. Yep, he would certainly have words to say to Willow, and I'm picturing his reaction to Xander's irreverence right now!

Yeah! I found it. I'd read this on another site but it was WIP. (http://litgal.brinkster.net/Moon/Magic1.htm)

I really enjoyed this story. I don't read maybe Faith stories but you captured her prefectly.

The ending was alittle quick - would have been nice too know what happen in the two weeks.

But still okay.

Cheers

I'm glad you enjoyed it. Unfortunately, seeing the next two weeks would have just shown them in their separate universes, but I do have thoughts for a sequel that picks up a few years down the road.

Loved this - shame she couldn't stay or he couldn't go, but still... I'm really hoping for a sequel. Oh, and I adored Riley's 'faith' statement: I land where I land... fantastic :)

Thank you so much. They really are committed to their separate worlds, but I hope one day that Severus can give up his battle to find a new life. And I did enjoy having Riley with all of his mom-and-apple-pie faith in here. Faith and Snape need a little of that.

This was EXCELLENT! You really gave me unexpected insights into Faith, Riley, Snape, and yes even Dumbledore. Plus, there was the hot groping of Severus at every opportunity (a DEFINITE plus)!

Thank you SO much. Knowing that I got someone to see a character differently... that is the best compliment a fanfic writer could ever want! And of course Severus deserved a little groping. He may not have been a nice man, but he was the best man he could be.

Hello,
Great story.
A sequel ???

Thank you... I am considering a sequel

Hi,

This was a great story, I really enjoyed it. I liked you Snape and Faith, would kind of like to see them again but not sure that is possible...but it is a nice thought. I look forward to when you next post a story, as I really enjoy reading your work. Thanks again for posting, hope the muses keep going.

Thanks so much. I really did try to create an ending that made it possible that Snape had used the pendant before he saw Harry and Willow pulled him out and saved him after Harry left. But then again, maybe not. For these two, the hope is about all they can hope for.

*Standing ovation.* (chanting) sequel, sequel, sequel, sequel....

Thank you so much!!! And I'm thinking about a sequel... I'm thinking about it.

great story.

Thanks!

Enjoyed this story. Sorry to see it end.

Thank you so much!