Review of chapter "Chapter Ten: Plagued Thoughts (FR-21)" from
DragonelfReview:
::Gives the plot bunny some Black Forest cake with extra chocolate::
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Words ought to be a little wild for they are
the assaults of thought on the unthinking.
- John Maynard Keynes
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Dragonelf] • Date [21 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten: Plagued Thoughts (FR-21)" from
RevDorothyLReview:
Love the Faith/Ronon mutual happy-making! And I can't wait to see how the Michael drama plays out in your version (if it plays at all).
Review By [
RevDorothyL] • Date [19 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten: Plagued Thoughts (FR-21)" from
ThedruidReview:
80% mortality? I thought the orginal Hoff drug only had a 50% fatality. And by the time of this plague that was reduced to only 30% fatality, with many people getting sick for a few weeks. Or am I wrong?
Good story BTW, just that little technical detail.
Comments from author:
I went off of this site, since its the one site i've found to be useful in random SGA info that i need:
http://www.tv.com/stargate-atlantis/show/11415/episode_guide.html?season=4&;tag=season_dropdown;dropdown;3 in particular the Kindred (1) gave me that 80% stat.
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Thedruid] • Date [19 Nov 08] • Not Rated
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SusangelReview:
Oh...I was hoping this would be a Faith/John pairing...
Oh well...It was still a very good chapter!
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Susangel] • Date [19 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten: Plagued Thoughts (FR-21)" from
AzureChaosReview:
What the hell, a nice trio works well since Ronon and John are already 'close' friends it's not that huge a leap and Faith's a modern kinda girl, she could handle the two of the...actually it might take two of them to keep her in line/satisfied.
There are several typos that spoil the flow of the story, but other than that, I'm enjoying it.
nate
Review By [
AzureChaos] • Date [19 Nov 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten: Plagued Thoughts (FR-21)" from
RaiderReview:
I lost it when I read “Is everyone on drugs?”
it was an effort to not spray my laptop with my last sip of coffee, as it was, that line, scratch that, that whole scene had me laughing till it hurt.
thank you for such a funny scene.
Review By [
Raider] • Date [19 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine: Overcoming Trepidation" from
SusangelReview:
Please let it be John!!!!!I loved it!Speacially the speech the evil spirit made to Faith!And Teyla got to save the day! :)
You have to update soon!
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Susangel] • Date [11 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine: Overcoming Trepidation" from
MinuetReview:
Really like this story so far.
Just a point of confusion though. At the beginning of the previous chapter, Faith is thinking back on the changes of Atlantis, one of which is the exchange of Samantha Carter for Richard Woolsey. But during this chapter, Sam is present, not Woolsey.
Comments from author:
...yeah i can't believe i did that... for some reason my past edit didn't work cause i wanted to keep the story close to the beginning of S4 but that edit didn't go through, but now i'll just keep it with Woolsey there and not Sam so i edited that last part of the chapter... for some odd reason, you're the only one who caught that! maybe cause everyone else skims the other parts and goes right to faith...LOL
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Minuet] • Date [11 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine: Overcoming Trepidation" from
manicReview:
I can't believe you did that to us! Brat! I like how the spirit psyched Faith out :)
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manic] • Date [10 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine: Overcoming Trepidation" from
DragonelfReview:
::Gives the plot bunny some Black Forest cake with extra chocolate::
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Science may set limits to knowledge, but
should not set limits to imagination.
- Bertrand Russell
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Dragonelf] • Date [10 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine: Overcoming Trepidation" from
DemaReview:
Okay i'm voting for Lorane, well unless Miller went to the SGC then Atlantis after SunnyHell.
I'm really loving this story. I really hope you update soon like today even. PLEASE!!
Review By [
Dema] • Date [10 Nov 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine: Overcoming Trepidation" from
irialonsoReview:
Well I'm guessing Ronon
hope I'm right
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irialonso] • Date [10 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine: Overcoming Trepidation" from
julieqtReview:
Cruel so sooo cruel.........well done
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julieqt] • Date [10 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine: Overcoming Trepidation" from
moonstarsfuReview:
Dude, that cliffhanger was mean!!! I for one am hoping for it to be Ronon, mainly because I haven't read many Ronon/Faith stories. Please update soon as I'm dying to know who it is.
Review By [
moonstarsfu] • Date [10 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine: Overcoming Trepidation" from
RaiderReview:
well, if it didnt before, this story just made my download list with that exorcism scene, dang that was good.
Review By [
Raider] • Date [10 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
