Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from
ChristyReview:
Please give us more..this is a fabulous story so far and I can't wait to read more.
Comments from author:
working out what happens when Giles Ethan Xander and Spike turn up. This isn't the life they'd choose for Dawn
Review By [
Christy] • Date [29 Sep 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from
MamaLadyWolfReview:
This is a good story please keep writing and posting it. It made me smile when I was feeling bad so thank you for that.
Comments from author:
working out what next
Review By [
MamaLadyWolf] • Date [30 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from
AomizuokoReview:
Good story plot. However, I don't think Wesley would be too keen on getting the help of a vampire. Dawn wouldn't tell anyone about her keyness, espesilly not a Master of the City. Still good story, though. I look forward to reading more.
Comments from author:
they've been running for three eyars and are tired. Wes nows how the rela world is so he would go to anyone who could to protect Dawn
Review By [
Aomizuoko] • Date [30 Jul 08] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from
AllenPittReview:
it'd be great for them to find a few other survivors... maybe Angel or Giles... also why would the watchers be so anxious to get Dawn? Surely there are hundreds of potentials ? Unless the turnover in slayers has been so high, they're afraid of 'running out' ?
Comments from author:
that adn she's got magic blood. Revenge on the line for Buffy sptting in their faces, too.
I was asked to have Faith alive. Giles is because Ethan was there, Spike may have saved Angel. someone wants Xander but if I do he won't be anyone's human servant.
Review By [
AllenPitt] • Date [30 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from
AliannaReview:
ok chapter!
Comments from author:
working on more of it now, actually. I forgot I'd done taht one adn hand't posted it. Other than Giles, Ethan, Spike,ANgel adn Faith I'm not sure who else lived. I have a lot of votes for Xnader but as this siafter three, not any other time he would not be anyone's human servant.
Review By [
Alianna] • Date [30 Jul 08] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapters Prologue-2" from
AriaDragoncrestReview:
Wonderful! Hope you write more.
Review By [
AriaDragoncrest] • Date [24 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapters Prologue-2" from
junnightsReview:
interesting:) never considered this:) I'd like to see more:D
hildegunn
Comments from author:
you're in the minority then. bu I'm thinking of more
Review By [
junnights] • Date [20 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapters Prologue-2" from
silvergaurdReview:
i really am a xander centric fan but wes is good too!
Comments from author:
well, you're in luck on that front too, chek Zeppo in vampire Land. normally i don't like Xander a all nad yet in taht one he's pretty good. but he is NOT supepowered or the savior of all
Review By [
silvergaurd] • Date [23 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapters Prologue-2" from
silvergaurdReview:
great start hope to see more soon!
Comments from author:
eventually, I hope. It seems more people prefer the Xander centric one but I ahd the idea for this one first
Review By [
silvergaurd] • Date [22 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapters Prologue-2" from
nightslayerReview:
cute start
Comments from author:
glad you liked it
Review By [
nightslayer] • Date [8 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapters Prologue-2" from
MamaLadyWolfReview:
please more. I like this story already, but I must ask for more.
Comments from author:
I'm working on it but class got a little hectic. college runs fast even for 28 year olds
Review By [
MamaLadyWolf] • Date [8 Nov 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapters Prologue-2" from
ladyenchantressReview:
I really like your story, there are not a lot of Wes and Dawn fics out there. I can't wait to see how it develops. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
thank yhou. I am working on more now
Review By [
ladyenchantress] • Date [6 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapters Prologue-2" from
AliannaReview:
Aaawwww!!!! that's such a sad but nicely written story!
Comments from author:
it get happier...eventually
Review By [
Alianna] • Date [6 Nov 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapters Prologue-2" from
AzrielSunHawkReview:
very interesting. i am not normally a dawn fic fan..but...i like this. i do hope you plan to continue with it.
Cheers!
Comments from author:
I plan to actually do a lot ehre since i have one to tow eyars before she cna be Damien's mate. however her being wiht him may increase his power to master or near it level
Review By [
AzrielSunHawk] • Date [5 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapters Prologue-2" from
RavenReview:
Great first chapter. Hope you can update soon, i want to know what happened to the gang!
Comments from author:
I'm not sure who but Giles lived at this point. Angel may have of Spike found him
Review By [
Raven] • Date [5 Nov 07] • Not Rated
