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ElleriaReview:
Love this.
Comments from author:
Thanks!
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Elleria] • Date [18 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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DemonaReview:
*snuggles xander and tony* *shakes gibbs*
Evil characters. Why did Gibbs have to be Gibbs? Seriously, I mean, why? But I am glad that Xander was there to pick up the pieces, and to let Tony know that he's not alone in this world.
And I do feel bad for Gibbs, he's having a hard time (during this particular moment in the show) and he isn't quite sure how to deal. It did break my heart when he left and Tony was put in charge, only to have it taken away immediately upon Gibbs' return. Yeah, making Gibbs into Gibbs' is kinda difficult. I feel for you :)
And then Gibbs' line, about Xander 'doing too'. *melts* You had me hating Gibbs on moment - wanting to strangle him - and then loving on him at the end :)
*high-fives for another prompt completed*
Comments from author:
*bad Kayla for not commenting*
Gibbs is cruel even when he doesn't mean to be. It's his gruff nature and Tony usually catches the brunt of it. Poor guy. That's why he needs Xander there to make him feel better and kick Gibbs in the ass when he needs it.
Yes, that point and time was hard on Gibbs and he needed to take of himself instead of trying to take care of the others. He just could have gone about it a bit differently to keep things a little easier on those around him.
Gibbs might not remember it all yet, but he knows that Tony has someone watching his six at least.
I'm getting better giving Gibbs possession of things. I will become the expert one day. Gibbs' possessions include Tony... *wink*
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Demona] • Date [16 Nov 07] • Not Rated
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HunterHReview:
Loved it :)
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Thanks!
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HunterH] • Date [13 Nov 07] • Not Rated
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DeeRoseReview:
Thanks for posting, that was really fun. I think you have a good handle on all the voices, something which is not easy. I'm looking forward to reading more in this series.
Comments from author:
Thanks on that review! Getting their voice right is the part I try to focus on the most. And there will be more in the works!
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DeeRose] • Date [13 Nov 07] • Not Rated
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purrfusReview:
Xander and Tony...a match made somewhere really wonderful.
And you more than do it justice.
More Please.
Comments from author:
Demona and I have 100 prompts to go through and we've only done three between us... So there will be more Xander and Tony. We will find out what happened to Gibbs' coffee. Exactly how Xander met Tony. The day Tony introduced his boyfriend to Gibbs and Abby. And there may even be side story of what happens when Abby and Dawn meet.
Thanks for reviewing!
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purrfus] • Date [13 Nov 07] • Not Rated
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angelkittyReview:
this is so good i really enjoyed it
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review! Glad you enjoyed!
Review By [
angelkitty] • Date [12 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]