Review of chapter "Negotiations" from
PrincessTaiReview:
Wow. That was a whole lotta Kindred. Had no idea what you were talking about, lol, but I enjoyed it none the less. I get special feelings from Cam. As in he's not such a jerkface? And Cash! Awwww.
But best of all is Faith. Girl gots the nitty-gritty and she knows how to bring it to the table! Truly enjoyed.
Review By [
PrincessTai] • Date [9 Nov 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Missing" from
PrincessTaiReview:
Yes! For an Ava save. But no for a Sam death. Shit, I can't possibly imagine how they will get rid of this one.
Comments from author:
I like saving characters. I'm not good at killing them off permanently - although I'll do it if I really feel like the story needs it.
You'll just have to read the next chapter to see if Sam makes it...(evil grin).
Thank you for all of your reviews!
Review By [
PrincessTai] • Date [4 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Shadows? I'll Show Them Shadows" from
PrincessTaiReview:
*throws* Confetti!
Yay Jess! :-D She was uncertain but she kicked ass to protect her family. Winchester through and through. And I so love the way she caught Meg's attention. lol
And seriously, now I'm going to have to go and netflix Embraced. *grumps*
Comments from author:
If you get Sci-Fi channel, they run eps in a marathon every so often...
Review By [
PrincessTai] • Date [4 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "You're Officially A Winchester Now" from
PrincessTaiReview:
Wow! I so and totally LOVE Jess. I love it when one of the brothers ends up with a girl that understands they need their brother time, but sees the value of each brother. It would have been totally understandable for Jess to stand by her man but I love it that she seems to have a seperate brain. Dean totally needed that and she was JUST the person to do it, and it occurred so naturally. Not like, Dean needs to hear it from someone other than the unit he's close to so I'll say it to make him feel better ... I could totally read the sincerity. I know Faith, if she was more entrenched in the family happenings, would have sided with Dean ... but that would have been expected. Sammy NEEDS a girl to hit him across the head and go IJIT! Cause he can-as much as I love him-so often act like one. Jess fits in so well with the family. It clicks. I am sure there are moments when she just won't get it or she'll be wrong, but that is what makes it all the more real. I am tempted to go and write to Kripke after this and go WHY!? LOL
Comments from author:
Dean was the one that ultimately said that she could come with them, so she knew from the beginning that she couldn't discount him just because she was with Sam. She left everyone and everything behind to go with them, so as a social creature that she is, she befriended her de facto brother in law and manages to insinuate herself into all of their lives in different ways...
Review By [
PrincessTai] • Date [3 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "New York, New York Part I" from
PrincessTaiReview:
I can never complain of Dean and Dana bonding time. Even when supernatural beings are playing with Deanie's head.
Perry? LOL. I had a Scrubs flash in my head :-D
Comments from author:
I think they take pretty good care of each other...
Review By [
PrincessTai] • Date [3 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Death's Door" from
PrincessTaiReview:
Well if he IS evil, it shouldn't be so bad. Faith can tell him that everyone on HER side of the family has gone evil at least once :-P Or seen their evil selves or done something to bring about at LEAST a mediocre form of evil or not so good alternate world.
I liked the insight in Dean's head. I was a bit wary about the notebooks at first. Cause it was like Dean ...notebooks?
I mean I am not structured to the one-sided view of Dean Macho Man; however, I do know there are such blatant sides of sensitivity that he is capable of but isn't fond of admitting. So I wasn't sure. But this played out really, really well. It sort of went in smooth. Like him admitting that he can't live a life without sammy (more times I can count lol). Nothing unusual. Dean has a diary. Not weird at all :-D
Comments from author:
Dean does NOT call it a diary, though...:)
Those notebooks are going to really help him in the future, actually. You'll see...:)
Review By [
PrincessTai] • Date [2 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dating, Scooby-Style" from
PrincessTaiReview:
First of Lindsey survived YAAAAAAY!!!!!!!!!!!!11
Well actually what woulda been first was Madison, and her awesome coolness and her weird humor (that I love) but um, I love Lindsey more so ... *shrugs*
Now onto Madison. Rockage. No Lilah for sure. And while I do love Lindsey and do strongly believe he has a heart (somewhere), I do believe a werechick who can beat the crap out of him was a good choice too. And I do love her sense of humor.
>>“Just a little. Willow might have mentioned that it was a good thing that I was a werewolf or I probably wouldn’t have a chance of attracting your attention,” Madison admitted.
I was thinking the SAME thing! lol :-D For a second I thought you were going to have her for Dean but I am so happy she's with Xander. I liked that you let us know what is up with her. Also love how you took care of Meg. Once again, go Deanie's powers! Have they met Ava? And Andy? I do hope they stick around too. Ava so rocked and Andy was the bestest! I didn't like his death or her evil-dealing ... then dying.
>> Keeping The Winchesters calm is a full-time job.
I think Madison should meet Xand in the land of understatements :-D
Comments from author:
I figured anyone who would drop their lingerie in front of Sam's face on the night that they met had to have a peculiar sense of humor and would be able to hold her own in their world if given a chance.
Keeping the Winchesters both calm and alive is a pretty tall order, I think...:)
Thank you for reading & reviewing!
Review By [
PrincessTai] • Date [2 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Loophole" from
PrincessTaiReview:
I forgot to say in the last chapter, along with my Faith leader comment. That I love the entire army thing, of their own. And I love how Sam AND Faith were on Dean's wavelength. Just like that :-D I always imagined that Dean was the general to the protected prince aka Sammy. Well, at least pre-season four (which I have yet to see so don't TELL!)
This was nice. Though they really need to stop talking about Dr. Joe during The Act :-P
Seriously though. Dr. Joe is right and he rocks. This made me smile.
I can't think who you can have for Dean that will already give me the sweet warm fuzzies and giggles when I read them together, but hit me!
Comments from author:
I won't tell, I promise.
Wait until you see what Dr. Joe does in later chapters!
Originally, I had planned to write Dean/Ruby, but as the story progressed, he was clicking with another character and the characters demanded that I obey...you're not there yet, so you'll see when you get to those chapters...:) Yes, I'm evil for not just telling you...
Review By [
PrincessTai] • Date [2 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Werewolf in San Francisco" from
PrincessTaiReview:
Wow. So weird to think of Madison and Sam and not think of sex and dean's perfect tear.
Really but I did enjoy this chapter. Faith is taking charge and is still Faith like. I do love the Azzface comment! lol
>>>Before anyone could say anything more, Dana walked over to Sam and peered into his eyes for a long moment. She nodded and pulled him into a hug, “You’re not evil. You’re my brother. It isn’t allowed. Winchester Rule # 26.”
Sam brought his arms up around her and hugged her back, placing a reassuring kiss on her forehead, “I thought there were only 25 Winchester Rules.”
“Winchester Rules are to be made up as necessary. That’s Winchester Rule # 12,” Dana informed him.
If you happen to have them listed please share ;-D
Review By [
PrincessTai] • Date [2 Nov 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Werewolf in San Francisco" from
PrincessTaiReview:
Wow. So weird to think of Madison and Sam and not think of sex and dean's perfect tear.
Really but I did enjoy this chapter. Faith is taking charge and is still Faith like. I do love the Azzface comment! lol
>>>Before anyone could say anything more, Dana walked over to Sam and peered into his eyes for a long moment. She nodded and pulled him into a hug, “You’re not evil. You’re my brother. It isn’t allowed. Winchester Rule # 26.”
Sam brought his arms up around her and hugged her back, placing a reassuring kiss on her forehead, “I thought there were only 25 Winchester Rules.”
“Winchester Rules are to be made up as necessary. That’s Winchester Rule # 12,” Dana informed him.
If you happen to have them listed please share ;-D
Comments from author:
There isn't a formal list, but that is an idea of something I could write up if I hit writer's block...thanks for the idea!
Review By [
PrincessTai] • Date [2 Nov 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Choices" from
PrincessTaiReview:
I am sorta back to reading :-D
Just HAD to know how it was going down. Am so lost.
Clan Slayer?
Edit: Forget it. For some strange reason, TTH had it that this where I was last but it wasn't.
Which is fine, more to read, which is always a good thing :-)
But I still would like to know more of the Clan's, if you could.
Comments from author:
Yes, a LOT more to read, I suspect.
I'll send you a separate e-mail about the Clans when I get a chance...not enough time tonight...:)
Review By [
PrincessTai] • Date [2 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Life Altering Moments, Part IV" from
feekhReview:
WOW. Double wow. And by the way, you evil, evil, cliffhanger-using, and have I mentioned evil(?) truly sadistic evil evilnessness.
*I pout in your general direction*
Comments from author:
I'm sorry that I made you pout, but flattered that I was able to...
Thank you for continuing to provide me with feedback!
Review By [
feekh] • Date [28 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Life Altering Moments, Part IV" from
DarksidheReview:
That was mean!
Comments from author:
Sorry - I couldn't help it; it was the last of the Life Altering Moments for the Winchester family...
Review By [
Darksidhe] • Date [26 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Life Altering Moments, Part IV" from
ChaoskittenReview:
lip quivers
no no no no no
*cries*
waits for the next installment.
*sniffles*
Comments from author:
Sometimes I just have to write a particular scene, even if it breaks my heart!
Next installment will be out once I get a little more inspiration for it. I haven't been able to hear the dialogue yet, so I can't quite put anything to paper until I do...
As soon as I can - promise!
Review By [
Chaoskitten] • Date [26 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Life Altering Moments, Part II" from
feekhReview:
I love it. My heart hurt for John, it really did. I am glad Mary gave him a reality check, he is certainly going to need it down the road. I love the updates you have put up since the last time I reviewed this. It is still easily one of my favourite stories. Till the next time, a bientot.
Comments from author:
Gracias! I'm glad you've enjoyed. Your reviews have inspired me to do my darndest to get another chapter out by tomorrow. I posted a DA/BtVS crossover a few minutes ago, so hopefully that will hold people over until I can get this one done. DA is my new obsession. I haven't read a lot of the stories yet, but I had something bouncing around in my head, so I just had to put it to paper, so to speak...
Hasta luego!
Review By [
feekh] • Date [20 Aug 08] • Not Rated