Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from
angelusReview:
hope you won't be using the Zach is Gormagon's apprentice plot cause I really hated that plotline cause he's one of my fav characters
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angelus] • Date [5 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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mendenbarReview:
You know, with very little effort this bunch can screw up Angel's reward and totally mess with Seeley's mind. Still, I like all the little confusions you keep adding in. Is Connor the gift from the PTB or is it Parker? At least I have faith that you won't get Angel/Seeley back with Buffy (please, don't?) as he is all Brennan's now.
Comments from author:
Buffy, at the very least, will not be appearing in this story. Maybe a sequel, because I can't imagine she could just let it go, but there's no B/A in mind for the future. (There is however, an idea of Buffy-Brennan snarkage, because those two would not be able to shut up in one another's vicinity).
(also, if your penname is from where I think it's from; I love those books!)
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mendenbar] • Date [3 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from
christytrekkieReview:
Oh My goodness, glad you finally updated. Why so short, please give us more. and sooner please.
Comments from author:
I'm using this as my post nano palate cleanser, so I'm only adding to it after my 2000 words for the day are done. I promise the next wait won't be so long at all. The season ender of Bones really killed my motivation to write since I got jossed six ways to Sunday.
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christytrekkie] • Date [3 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from
christytrekkieReview:
This is a very well thought out story I surely hope that you continue with it
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christytrekkie] • Date [5 Sep 08] • Not Rated
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RoryReview:
Oh, I like this series! Like, really like this series. And I love that you crossed over with Criminal Minds too, some of my favorite shows are here. XD Great writing, can't wait for more.
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Rory] • Date [16 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from
ChristyReview:
please don't stop there! It's just getting interesting. :D
Review By [
Christy] • Date [15 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from
mendenbarReview:
Everybody thinks Booth is Angel(andI must admit, I do too).
Review By [
mendenbar] • Date [30 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from
BunneyReview:
Good Chapter!
Later and LOve
Bunney
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Bunney] • Date [24 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from
spikeReview:
great job so far I also would like to pretend the season finale didn't happen in my twisted world Sweets is gormagon or whatever they called him (mainly cause I don't like him and I like Zach) speaking of which will you address the Gormagon thing or will you flat out ignore it I personally think the writers were smoking something that day lol
Comments from author:
I will be addressing the season finale, but not in this fic and probably not for a while. I'm waiting because the Criminal Minds finale was a cliffhanger (grrrr) and I need to know what horrible things happen to Spencer so I can figure out how to deal with Zack. (Thankfully Jossverse is a closed cannon and I don't have to wait to be Jossed by Joss, since I don't do the comics). Also, Zack was so not Gormogon's apprentice (grrr).
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spike] • Date [23 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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AllenPittReview:
Funny, each group (connor/Karina & the slayers etc) reinforce each other's idea that something's up with Booth.... ie Karina sees slayers hovering around, that makes it more probable that something is up
So Parker is a construct....weird. Of course the prophecy is likely about Connor... Willow is making assumptions again...
Connor would come as a big surprise to the slayers, since Faith never told anyone & then memories were erased.. and the slayers would likely not be happy about a slayer who isn't in their group...
Comments from author:
Willow, sadly, is not always right and sometimes jumps to more conclusions than she should. Though in this case she doesn't have all the necessary information. Glad you're enjoying :)
Review By [
AllenPitt] • Date [22 May 08] • Not Rated
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NaiveGhostReview:
Much better (ie more/longer;-)
;-)
Comments from author:
thanks :)
Review By [
NaiveGhost] • Date [22 May 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from
BunneyReview:
ooohhhh see that was cruel! I'm proud :)
Later and Love
Bunney
Comments from author:
Lol, Glad you liked it!
Review By [
Bunney] • Date [21 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from
mekaReview:
Given the shock I had from the season finale of Bones, this was very welcomed by my frayed nerves. Hope you keep going.
meks
Comments from author:
There'll probably one more part this week. Right now, I'm living in denial of the finale.
Review By [
meka] • Date [21 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from
zillagirlReview:
I really like this series. The only suggestion I would make is to lengthen your chapters. Be that as it may, I really like how you've caught the characters so well - Giles, Faith, Connor. I also like the mystery/crime factor added in. I've always wanted to do crossovers with crime/mystery series, but I'm just not able to concoct a good enough mystery.
Keep it up!
Comments from author:
This is the first time I've tried to do a WIP instead of just posting when everything is finished. It's sort of an odd way to work, and I usually just post what I wrote that day. Sadly my word limit is about 700 words a day. Maybe when it's all finished I'll go through and re-work the formatting/chapters. I'm glad you're enjoying it.
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zillagirl] • Date [21 May 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]
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NaiveGhostReview:
Okay, that was just a teaser!!!! ;-)
Keep writing!
;-)
Comments from author:
Oh, look: there's more :)
Review By [
NaiveGhost] • Date [21 May 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]