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VoraxReview:
Chapters! Learn how to use them!
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Vorax] • Date [20 May 08] • Not Rated
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manicReview:
Loved them all! Thanks for sharing.
Review By [
manic] • Date [30 Nov 07] • Not Rated
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ElleriaReview:
Hahaha! Love this series very much.
Review By [
Elleria] • Date [25 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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RebelgirlReview:
I think I kinda agree with Spike, it is kinda scary that Shepard and Xander think alike, do you think that Shepard could be a demon magnet too?
Review By [
Rebelgirl] • Date [22 Nov 07] • Not Rated
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LNRReview:
Umm, wasn't it Rodney who wanted to call it a Gate-Ship?
Review By [
LNR] • Date [21 Nov 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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DeeRoseReview:
Gotta say, I am really enjoying this series, however, please run them by a beta. The first sentence in this story is a run on, and it's not the only one. You have several small grammar mistakes in each story, that while not horrible on their own each take away from the overall feel of the series. I think your ideas are fun, and worth reading, just - ya know - let a beta see them.
Dee
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DeeRose] • Date [21 Nov 07] • Not Rated
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BobbokyReview:
nice
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Bobboky] • Date [21 Nov 07] • Not Rated
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treneeReview:
haha.. love that .. i really don't know which is worse.. lol.. i mean xander is just xander but john is the military commander of an entire city.. hehe.. oh man that was good.. and yeah i can so see that conversation going like that.. lol..
trenee aewnaur
Review By [
trenee] • Date [21 Nov 07] • Not Rated
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angelkittyReview:
thinking alike isn't that like a warning to the end of the world
Review By [
angelkitty] • Date [21 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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HecatonchiresReview:
Sorry, but this one really bugs me. In your summary, you have 'aloud' (which means making noise) not 'allowed' (which means permission)
Review By [
Hecatonchires] • Date [21 Nov 07] • Not Rated
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martelcrisReview:
Do you imagine Shepard, Xander, Spike and O'Neill together on a mission ?
wackiness assured !!!
Review By [
martelcris] • Date [21 Nov 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
