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ShezziReview:
Oh, that was fun! i'd really like to see more of this, if you can come up with it...it would be really interesting...anyways, thanks for sharing! love xx Shezzi
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Shezzi] • Date [1 Jan 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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WinchestergrlReview:
I like this. I can't wait to read more. Please update this soon.
Comments from author:
Thanks! I'll try and get the next chappie up ASAP!
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Winchestergrl] • Date [21 Dec 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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BuffyCharmedReview:
Was beginning to think you wouldn't continue! Love the update and can't wait for more. :)
Comments from author:
Hehe sorry it took me long to get up this chapter. You know, finals and all that jazz. I'll get up the next one after I add a chapter to my Buffy/HP fic!
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BuffyCharmed] • Date [20 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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saniReview:
you show him buffy lol. That will teach him thinking she is only a girly girl :) great story. I just love Papa Winchester and JDM is not bad at all:) you should write more.
Comments from author:
I love Papa Winchester as well! I wish he was in the show more! Glad you're liking it!
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sani] • Date [19 Dec 07] • Not Rated
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dharkcharlotteReview:
Love to read more!
Comments from author:
Glad you're loving it! I'll get out another chapter ASAP! :)
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dharkcharlotte] • Date [19 Dec 07] • Not Rated
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EllieReview:
Personally I'd love to see more of this. I liked the "tingle".LOL
-Ellie
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Ellie] • Date [8 Dec 07] • Not Rated
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LisaReview:
Would be definitely interested in seeing if John ended up showing up at the vamps nest. Perhaps he was on the same trail and figured the little blonde could use a helping hand.
Watch out for your sentences, sometimes they run-on and would flow a little better by making one sentence into two or more.
Love the description that you placed in there about Jo and her appearance being so innocent, yet so far from the truth. You really packed a lot of goodness into that part. Lots was said without having to actually say it. Wonderful job!
*cough* Write more in this verse? *cough*
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Lisa] • Date [26 Nov 07] • Not Rated
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mithrilandtjReview:
Damn!
And John didn't follow her?
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mithrilandtj] • Date [24 Nov 07] • Not Rated
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heathenseyesReview:
I love the story, I do hope you continue, it would be interesting to see how they meet up again and where it goes from there.
:)
Review By [
heathenseyes] • Date [24 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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TimeShifterReview:
I would really like to read more, If you ever write more. I think you did a really good job.
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TimeShifter] • Date [24 Nov 07] • Not Rated
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CladdaghReview:
Oooh, I really like this! More, please?
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Claddagh] • Date [24 Nov 07] • Not Rated
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BuffyCharmedReview:
Oh, please continue! I love Buffy/John interaction. :)
Review By [
BuffyCharmed] • Date [24 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]