Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from
FireDragonReview:
wow this is awesome. what a twist. It makes sense that that would be something that would cause him a moment of true happiness. Poor Buffy once again being alive has caused someone she loves to basically die. only this time he has changed to the stuff of nightmares.
I am a little confused though, is Buffy Snape's daughter or is she really his niece?
Review By [
FireDragon] • Date [2 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from
keganReview:
I'm so happy you updated, it's been a while, lol. Anyway this still looks really interesting and I can't wait for more! I've always been a sucker for Buffy/Draco romance!
Review By [
kegan] • Date [2 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from
shiReview:
All have have to say is more please. I love it.
Review By [
shi] • Date [20 Jun 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from
jackieReview:
I love this story and hope you'll update soon, I can't wait for more!
Review By [
jackie] • Date [7 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from
macalaarmstrongReview:
I love this story so much and that was a great twist the cousin being there. I am glad that it appears Buffy will have somebody from her family being with her...helping her. I hope you update soon. Great story!!! Keep up the great work and update soon. Have a lovely day.
Smile,
Macala A.
Review By [
macalaarmstrong] • Date [5 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from
FritolaysReview:
Good update! I can't wait to see who this mysterious person is that Buffy knows. Don't make us wait too long :)
Comments from author:
I am gladded that you enjoyed it! I am half way through writing the next chapter so hopefully it will not be long.
Review By [
Fritolays] • Date [29 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from
purrfusReview:
Continues to be an interesting mix.
Your note indicated you aren't working with a Beta. You might want to try reading the chapters out loud. Some of the words are what they need to be be.
For example - when the boys are peeking into the library - in the story they are pecking.
Good Luck
Comments from author:
Thank you for that suggestion. It is something that I will impliment from now on.
Review By [
purrfus] • Date [28 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from
frostynessReview:
I love the story so far. It's really interesting. And I'm looking forward to your next chapter.
P.S. And if you are looking for a beta, I'm offering my services.
Comments from author:
Thank you for taking the time for a reveiw!
Review By [
frostyness] • Date [28 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from
JeanClaudesloverReview:
I like this... but I'm kind of confused so I hope you continue... I guess that was Harry who walked into the library cause i don't see the twins talking to Draco
Comments from author:
You are right, it is not Draco, it is not Harry either. I have only seen this person used in one other story.
Review By [
JeanClaudeslover] • Date [28 Dec 07] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from
macalaarmstrongReview:
Wow!!! That was a great story so far, but I can't figure out for the life of me who the boy is...I guess I will have to wait to find out. Keep up the great work and have a lovely day.
Smile,
Macala A.
Comments from author:
Thank you, I am glad that you are enjoying it so far. I thank everyone will be surprised when the boy id. is reveled.
Review By [
macalaarmstrong] • Date [28 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
FritolaysReview:
Great start to a story! I do have a question, is Snape Buffy's real biological father or is he just saying he is her father now since her parents are dead? I'm not sure I understood all that. Anyhow, I can't wait to read more :)
Comments from author:
What happen and how Buffy came to this point will be explained in the chapter after the next!
Review By [
Fritolays] • Date [4 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from
justapiranhaReview:
ok you got my intrest, what now?
Comments from author:
Thank you for reading!
Review By [
justapiranha] • Date [27 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from
lilcutieReview:
i love it keep it up. and yummy a dracoo/bufff pairing there really arent 2 many of these and its my fav pairing
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [
lilcutie] • Date [27 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from
macalaarmstrongReview:
I really like the beginning of your story. I am definitely have to stick around to see what happens. Keep up the great work and have a wonderful day.
Smile,
Macala A.
Comments from author:
Thank you for reading and your incouraging words.
Review By [
macalaarmstrong] • Date [27 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from
jupitarsdaughterReview:
Real interesting! I like! It's a slightly different take on things, me thinks.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I don't believe I have ever read a story where the council tried to "fix" the situation that accrued.
Review By [
jupitarsdaughter] • Date [26 Nov 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]