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SusanAnthonyReview:
Very interesting beginning! I look forward to seeing where it goes and how long its takes Adam to lose his mind.
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SusanAnthony] • Date [18 Sep 08] • Not Rated
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zafaranReview:
{snicker} Don't have the fallout shelter, but do have the fatalistic mindset considering I'm downwind of a primary target along a normal weather track though I'm not as close as Adam was to NORAD. Any chance of more chapters any time soon? Pretty please? I hope your schedule and muse will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm
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zafaran] • Date [5 Jul 08] • Not Rated
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ferballReview:
Really looking forward to more of this
"It’s not often you meet a man with his own fallout shelter next to a primary target"
Considering the targeting methods in those days, probably the safest place to be!
jen
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ferball] • Date [22 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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AllyssiandraReview:
I'm intrigued... update soon please.
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Allyssiandra] • Date [16 Mar 08] • Not Rated
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BuzzReview:
Good intro, totally looking forward to the next chapter.
P.S. Major LOLs:
"However, the most saturated in every kind of Magick and magic in the Western hemisphere was an itty bitty, teeny tiny, tourist trap in the Colorado Rockies. Sound familiar? Well that’s because with the exclusion of the front range, all towns in the Colorado Rockies are itty bitty, teeny tiny tourist traps."
It's hilarious because it's true. *dead from laughs*
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Buzz] • Date [19 Feb 08] • Not Rated
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slbwhitewolfReview:
An interesting opening, I'm intrigued. You've done a good job of introducing the characters and I look forward to seeing where this is going.
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slbwhitewolf] • Date [29 Nov 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
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sistercityReview:
Who's the second boy? There didn't seem to be any real clues - unlike for Harry Potter.
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sistercity] • Date [29 Nov 07] • Not Rated
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AlyspinsReview:
I like it! Please write more and update soon.
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Alyspins] • Date [28 Nov 07] • Not Rated
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jupitarsdaughterReview:
Seems interesting enough.
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jupitarsdaughter] • Date [28 Nov 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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MarbleGloveReview:
Oh fun. A very good start. I look forward to seeing where you go from here. Keep writing.
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MarbleGlove] • Date [28 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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DemonaReview:
Please add a disclaimer - Rule 10.
Demona
TtH Mod
Comments from author:
Thanks for the reminder, I'm an idiot!
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Demona] • Date [28 Nov 07] • Not Rated
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purrfusReview:
Kinda weird but interesting.
Its a bit rushed for the number of characters and moves so far but maybe doable for an introduction as long as it slows down.
I'll be watching for the next installment.
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purrfus] • Date [28 Nov 07] • Not Rated
