Painful to read. Very well put together.

Can somebody drop a tank or something on Dumbledore. I can get the greater good, but I can't stand the character and think you've done a wonderful job showcasing why I feel that way.

Yeah, Dumbledore was actually one of my least favorite characters in the books because he was always hiding things and ignoring people 'for the greater good'. I mean, I know he was insanely smart and everything, but sharing is something you learn in preschool!
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Hm....no indication of the 'killing a human is forbidden by the slayer line' in the series.....but it works! and makes sense (in 'reality', the shadow men who created the slayer probably didn't care that much.....but what the heck)---
Great angst! Though I would think that a lot of this is Voldy testing Faith to make sure of her loyalty, one would think he doesn't really spend that much of his time torturing muggles--he's got his eyes set on taking over the wizarding world---- hopefully he'll use her for 'more important stuff' later on--

I totally made up the killing humans thing, but in the show Faith said she couldn't get it out of her head, she saw them. Anyway, I thought it would have been better if there had been some kind of reason/response if a slayer killed a human.
As for Voldy, he wasn't so much into torture, but his death eaters were. It was alluded to in the books. In the fourth book they commented that when the Death Eaters get together to party, death usually occurs. They're kind of a creepy bunch.
Voldemort will DEFINITELY be using her for more important things. And soon. Or soonish.
I hadn't originally planned to write more for this, but I kind of need to know how it all ends. So I'm gonna keep writing. Probably randomly, it takes a lot out of me emotionally to write something like this. It probably sounds cheesy, but angst filled fics get all of my work aggravations out. I'm a therapist at a battered women's shelter. So yeah.
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I am so glad the Scoobies are coming to help out Faith.

Well Andrew has been calling. He takes his business as Faith's watcher very seriously.
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Great story. Absolutely fantastic. Sad to see it's one-shot though :(

Lovely! Angst, angst, angst!
Love the Charlie and Faith bit, that's my thought of her SO in the wizarding world too! :P