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Review of chapter "ten" from kayron
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This is a good story with great sequel potential! At first I felt so bad for Xander since he lost everyone. I mean, all he has left are a few items (like Mr. Pointy or the remnant of Dawn-a green energy ball) to represent the severity of his loss. Sure he has Blair and Jim, but they have their own lives in another city. Meeting John and the Atlantis team gives Xander a chance for a new life. Xander needs someone to care for. While his council duties are important, he can be replaced. John needs Xander, and Xander needs to be needed. I would love to see how they learn to relate to one another, and how Xander deals with the alien weird rather than the supernatural weird. Hint, hint, hint. Any possibility of a sequel?
Review By [kayron] • Date [21 Nov 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "ten" from spring
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I love this wonderful fic. Please please please tell me that you wrote a sequel to this wonderful fic.
Review By [spring] • Date [4 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "ten" from Duskie
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This was awesome I loved the feel to it, really loved your unflappable Xander. I hope you are going to do a sequel with Xander and John getting back to the Pegasus galaxy.

I would enjoy the changes that would have to happen in everyone’s life to accommodate John and of coarse unflappable Xander in Atlantis. I would love to see Rodney’s reaction to Xander thinking it was just unfair them getting a better place to save the world from instead of being overwhelmed by the magnificence of it.

So Basically I hope you intend to write a sequel.
(Fingers crossed)
Review By [Duskie] • Date [28 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "ten" from MinaLynn
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I LOVE this story. Any chances of a sequel or even an epilogue to see Xander in Atlantis? I bet she will love him. .. I'd love to see him taking on a Wraith. His witty banter would drive Rodney batshit.
Review By [MinaLynn] • Date [25 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "ten" from kayron
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I enjoyed it! This story is definitely sequel worthy. HINT...HINT...HINT!
Review By [kayron] • Date [9 Apr 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from emmsie
Review:
Love this universe and would adore finding more of it when I turned on my computer! Hope you get inspired
Review By [emmsie] • Date [2 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "ten" from Miststalker
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I certainly hope you write more in this universe it's great!
Review By [Miststalker] • Date [12 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "ten" from MistieMossflower
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Great story, I was just wondering if there would be a sequel of John & Xander in Atlantis?
Review By [MistieMossflower] • Date [12 Feb 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "ten" from MistressTitania
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That was awesome! I loved it so much! I giggled at so many parts. I loved the way Xander handled the news that he was a guide for John. I hope you write further adventures in this universe.
Review By [MistressTitania] • Date [13 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "nine" from purrfus
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John and Xander in the morning – it’s a good thing. I hope they have lots of mornings together.

The training is so much fun to read. I hope somebody’s taking video to show back at Atlantis. There are marines that would probably pay big bucks to see Ronon taken down by a little girl.

Poor John. Its sounds like he'll have more people wanting to test and experiment on him than Jim ever had to worry about.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [12 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "eight" from purrfus
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Great job showing / expressing the SGA’s fears and worries about and for John.

The dialog and zingers are good throughout the story, but some like : “We went, we mocked, we slayed, we had pizza" – that just says it all.

Ronon as a feral lion is just yummy.

Blair and Andrew…an interesting yet scary combo.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [12 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "ten" from HiltonK
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Brilliant.

Please keep writing, add more, etc, etc, Make it new Years Res 2008! :0)

H_K

PS Where can I find more of the Blair's Brother verse?
Review By [HiltonK] • Date [31 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "ten" from SusanAnthony
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I loved the motto -- 'We went, we mocked, we slayed, we had pizza'. That is so perfectly the Scoobies. I enjoyed reading this story.
Review By [SusanAnthony] • Date [30 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "seven" from purrfus
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Xander's explanation makes so much sense.

It really good the way you think these things up then explain them so they make sense to a reader while remaining true to the character's voice.

Xander telling Ronon to pick up McKay, and Ronon putting McKay in Xander's lap? I think I need to re-read that section.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [28 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "six" from purrfus
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"growly snuggly flyboy" - You have such a way with words. ; )

Definitely want to see / hear/ learn more about Max.

Can't wait for the bustups with Xan at SGC and Atlantis.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [28 Dec 07] • Not Rated
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