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springReview:
Give me more and I can give you some more feedback. I like it so far, so more soon please.
Review By [
spring] • Date [27 Dec 07] • Rating [5 out of 10]
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FritolaysReview:
Good start and idea. I can't wait to see where you go with this :)
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Fritolays] • Date [4 Dec 07] • Not Rated
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martelcrisReview:
A little short but there are promises going.
I hope to see more soon.
Comments from author:
The next chapter will definately be longer. Thanks for the review.
Review By [
martelcris] • Date [1 Dec 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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CPTSkipReview:
I think this is a terrific start. My mind is just bubbling with questions about where you will go with this premise. Please continue, I so want to see 'Mine's inner Slayer finally come out. Lol!
Comments from author:
Hmmmmm. Now who said Hermione was a slayer? Who says it was a Slayer who made the wish? I didn't. We'll just have to see which way her character wants to go. This story seems to be writing itself.
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CPTSkip] • Date [1 Dec 07] • Not Rated