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katimaviklindzyReview:
I like this story, I hope you plan on continuing it.
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katimaviklindzy] • Date [26 Nov 08] • Not Rated
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BethReview:
I love this story and would love to read more of it...when could there possibly be an update? And do you plan on bringing back Buffy? Please don't, I'm sort of tired of her at the moment and I've always had a soft spot for the underdogs like Dawn and Xander. Dawn especially...
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Beth] • Date [17 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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betrayalReview:
Hey, I found your story months ago. But, then, I thought you'd never update again so I didn't review... at least I don't think... anyways I just wanted to say that I love the story so far, and that I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work.
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betrayal] • Date [4 Jun 08] • Not Rated
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NaiveGhostReview:
Interesting place to take Dawn. (BtVS)
;-)
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NaiveGhost] • Date [20 May 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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ScrappychicReview:
I really like this so far and can't wait to read more.
I like how Christina seems to know what's really going on with the whole "satanic host" comment. She also knew Dawn was from Sunnydale. It could have just been from the news like she said, or she could have some inside information.
Hey! Maybe she's a former vengeance demon like Anya... after all, Dawn does compare the two on a couple of occasions and it would definitely explain her "I don't care about anyone but me" attitude. It doesn't explain how she has parents though... oh well, just a minor detail. :)
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Scrappychic] • Date [9 May 08] • Not Rated
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PrimitivePixxReview:
Congrats.. You got me crying in the first chapter. :P
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PrimitivePixx] • Date [9 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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FighterReview:
I just found the story and I love it. I hope that Spike does actually come there and I like how everyone gets along with Dawn. I can't wait to read more. Please come back soon.
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Fighter] • Date [9 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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CallmemasterKentReview:
I'm diggin' it... The tone is a little different from the first two chapters but I still like it a lot. Well done.
Cheers
MJ
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CallmemasterKent] • Date [9 May 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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TempeReview:
I'm trying not to cry. Really. This story just made me a little emotional. I was surprised when you chose Izzie but now that I've read more than a chapter I can see why you did. I also love that Christina is Dawn's favorite. She's always been mine too on the show. Anyway, I'm really hoping that Spike will move to Seattle but I don't know if that's realistic or not what with no one there to take care of the Hellmouth. Of course, since everyone knows Buffy's actually dead in your story it seems unlikely that anyone will try to bring her back to life. So maybe the Council will have to have Faith released. Enough speculation though. Anyway, I can't wait to read more. I can't imagine how you'll be able to bring in Scooby knowledge to Seattle Grace though. Good luck with that.
Comments from author:
Christina and Bailey and McSteamy are totally my faves on the show. I can't seem to get enough of them. You're right about the not bringing Buffy back in this fic, it just isn't going to happen. I'm afraid Spik wont be moving to Seattle, though it would make sense to have more vamps there what with all the overcast days and all. At least three quarters of the year. He'll be visiting though. He isn't one to just take Dawn's word that she's fine. Thank you so much for reading.
As for Izzie, I thought she and Dawn had a lot in common, personality wise.
- D
Review By [
Tempe] • Date [8 May 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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DragonelfReview:
Yay, new chapter.
::Feeds the plot bunny::
Comments from author:
YOUR the reason the bunny is distracting me at work!
- D
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Dragonelf] • Date [8 May 08] • Not Rated
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AriaDeloncrayReview:
Great chapter! Update soon.
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AriaDeloncray] • Date [8 May 08] • Not Rated
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AllenPittReview:
Gee, nobody likes Hank Summers (in most fics I've seen). I wonder why. Heh. Someday I hope to see a story come out in which it turns out he's the secret head of the Initiative or James Bond or something ....damn, there's a plot bunny....
Should be funny when Spike shows up, then spends all his time hovering around the hospital and Dawn. Won't look like a stalker, no sirree..... lucky thing he's got the chip, or he'd pay old Hank a visit....
I'd think Tara would want to check on her, too......
I wonder if anyone told Faith about what happened.....
*** Next up, you might to have the doctors find those scars on her wrists.....'attempted suicide' or cutting ---could spark some repercussions...
Comments from author:
There's a fic out there somewhere where he's a good guy who left to keep the girls safe .... he comes back when B dies and explains it to Dawn but I don't remember what the fic was or what the crossover was. It wasn't very well written, but I liked the idea.
- D
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AllenPitt] • Date [8 May 08] • Not Rated
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zigpalReview:
*gives Damia a high five* Yes, Hank, the ass, gets told off, and he is sending money and papers, doesn't make him any less of an ass though. Loved the Dawn/Spike phone convo, I hope he doesn't come to Seattle to screw up things for Dawn, maybe he can call now anf then to check up on her.
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zigpal] • Date [8 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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SabrynaReview:
It's a very good beginning. I like the idea of Dawn being Izzie's cousin. I am looking forward the next part. Do you plan to update soon?
Hope to read you soon.
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Sabryna] • Date [5 May 08] • Not Rated
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ReptileTongueReview:
PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE UPDATE! YOU CANNOT STOP IT HERE!!
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ReptileTongue] • Date [3 Feb 08] • Not Rated